Talk:Jaime Wolf (Individual Overlord-C-class DropShip)

Check for clarity

I just proofed this article to standardize its formatting and found this sentence to be awkward: "There, the Ryuken Tai-sa Tori Ishihara proved the ISF intel abilities showing than she knew it was Hack itself the one which captured the DropShip." A quick check of our database showed Hack = Henry Kincaid, but otherwise I tried to smooth the rest the best I could without having read that novel. Maybe someone else can double check for accuracy. --Csdavis715 (talk) 22:33, 9 June 2023 (EDT)