Editing User talk:Detlef

==Thanks for the Criticism==

Sorry about the short articles I wrote for Roxborough, Mundo Nublar, Siroc and St. Jean.  If there is not much information (or, in the case of Roxborough, I never read the supplement), I find it hard to write anything substantive.  Further, I firmly believe in the Moratorium on recent material, and I thought it might actually be hopeful to leave a tantalizing reference, and tell the reader exactly which supplement (s)he might buy to learn more...

Just so we are clear, I wanted to know if you thought my other recent work ([[Tanite Worlds]], [[Jarnfolk]], [[Hanseatic League]], [[Nueva Castile and the Umayyad Caliphate]]) is fine, or if my other recent articles need work, too.  I have been using Wikis for a little while now, but still I really have only authored ~10 articles, so I might be a little novice.

Any constructive criticism you could give would be appreciated.  Thanks!

--[[User:S.Gage]]

:In hindsight, I thought, I sounded pretty harsh. These articles look fine. --[[User:Detlef|Detlef]] 04:46, 25 April 2009 (PDT)

==Welcome==

Hi, Detlef, and welcome! I imagine you must be the former [[User talk:89.49.216.11|89.49.216.11]] that I just welcomed also, so its good to have you registered so quickly. [[User:Frabby|Frabby]] is also German and is very active here. You should say 'hi' when you get the chance. We're glad to have you aboard! --[[User:Revanche|Revanche]] <sup>([[User_talk:Revanche|talk]]|[[Special:Contributions/Revanche|contribs]])</sup> 10:05, 31 August 2008 (CDT)

:Thanks for the welcome. ;)
:Actually, this is my second account. I forgot my password for the first one and left no e-mail-address. --[[User:Detlef|Detlef]] 10:14, 31 August 2008 (CDT)

::Aaah, ok. Just for the record, who were you before? --[[User:Revanche|Revanche]] <sup>([[User_talk:Revanche|talk]]|[[Special:Contributions/Revanche|contribs]])</sup> 10:31, 31 August 2008 (CDT)

:::I was [[User:DetlefK|DetlefK]]. --[[User:Detlef|Detlef]] 10:37, 31 August 2008 (CDT)

::::I'm sorry I don't have the privileges to open that account for you, but now (at least) you're linked with the contributions from that account. Again, welcome (back). --[[User:Revanche|Revanche]] <sup>([[User_talk:Revanche|talk]]|[[Special:Contributions/Revanche|contribs]])</sup> 10:55, 31 August 2008 (CDT)

==Unit names==
I use german sources and have trouble translating some unit names. "Kingstons Legionäre" were part of Task Force Serpent. I thought, they are "Kingston's Rangers", but now I've seen, there is also a unit named "Kingston's Legionnaires". So, before I start revising the Task Force Serpent-article, I'd like to know what's what. --[[User:Detlef|Detlef]] 14:57, 23 January 2009 (PST)

:: This is an instance of an actual in-universe name change. ''Kingston's Legionnaries'' first popped up in [[2916]] according to [[House Liao (The Capellan Confederation)]] and became the ''Kingston's Rangers'' in [[3062]] according to [[Field Manual: Capellan Confederation]], after Serpent. [[Twilight of the Clans]] and section on Task Force Serpent in [[Shattered Sphere]] also confirm they were referred to as Kingston's Legionnaires and not Rangers during that time period. [[User:Cyc|Cyc]] 20:18, 23 January 2009 (PST)

==References==
Hy Detlef, please can you add reference foot notes, then is clear from what for source you added , thanks.--[[User:Doneve|Doneve]] 18:40, 17 August 2010 (UTC)
:Ähm, ich meinte zwar nicht die nummerierungen der sources, ich geb dir ein fach mal ein beispiel, hinter dem geposteten gibst du einfach davor''source z.b FedCom Civil War (sourcebook)'', p. ?? - "little overview text" ein und das war's, Danke. Lösch das beispiel bitte ist ja nur ein beispiel damit der rote tag auf deiner seite verschwindet<ref></ref>
--[[User:Doneve|Doneve]] 19:26, 17 August 2010 (UTC)

::Das mit den Fußnoten mache ich dann lieber in einem Rutsch, wenn ich fertig bin. Ich wette ein Haufen links ist sowieso fehlerhaft. --[[User:Detlef|Detlef]] 19:32, 17 August 2010 (UTC)
:::Tu das, ich fix die fehler dann.--[[User:Doneve|Doneve]] 19:48, 17 August 2010 (UTC)