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I begin falling as the fireball expands, the jumpjets are almost ready. When I am within 20 meters of the ground I engage my jumpjets, only slightly decreasing my speed before I hit the concrete. My Blood Asp falls sideways because my legs weren't strait down when I landed, and the impact partially strips gears in my 'Mech's knees causing it to limp. I begin falling as the fireball expands, the jumpjets are almost ready. When I am within 20 meters of the ground I engage my jumpjets, only slightly decreasing my speed before I hit the concrete. My Blood Asp falls sideways because my legs weren't strait down when I landed, and the impact partially strips gears in my 'Mech's knees causing it to limp.
− I re-erect my 'Mech and begin to hobble towards shelter. Jacob, Cody and Reed run out the hole that Cody blew in the wall, Clyde turns to follow them. + I re-erect my 'Mech and begin to hobble towards shelter. Jacob, Cody and Reed run out the hole that Cody blew in the wall, Clyde tuns to follow them.
"Clyde take out those Burrocks." I say. "Clyde take out those Burrocks." I say.
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I begin falling as the fireball expands, the jumpjets are almost ready. When I am within 20 meters of the ground I engage my jumpjets, only slightly decreasing my speed before I hit the concrete. My Blood Asp falls sideways because my legs weren't strait down when I landed, and the impact partially strips gears in my 'Mech's knees causing it to limp. | I begin falling as the fireball expands, the jumpjets are almost ready. When I am within 20 meters of the ground I engage my jumpjets, only slightly decreasing my speed before I hit the concrete. My Blood Asp falls sideways because my legs weren't strait down when I landed, and the impact partially strips gears in my 'Mech's knees causing it to limp. | ||
− | I re-erect my 'Mech and begin to hobble towards shelter. Jacob, Cody and Reed run out the hole that Cody blew in the wall, Clyde | + | I re-erect my 'Mech and begin to hobble towards shelter. Jacob, Cody and Reed run out the hole that Cody blew in the wall, Clyde tuns to follow them. |
"Clyde take out those Burrocks." I say. | "Clyde take out those Burrocks." I say. |