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Line 14: ''[[Marcus Kotare]]'': Paragraph syntax revision, refocused article to describe the character. Most sentences revised to fit the content changes, though appropriate elements were retained. Removed various segments that -I could not find to be supportable, and -stated opinions. Dates were conflicting (Captured in 3060, but his planet was invaded in 3059? Eh?) and removed to avoid the messy bits; no specific dates could be found for a few sections (by me at least). Citation needed on mentions of Clan Nova Cat - I can't verify the info one way or another at the moment, and I don't want to delete it, so it along with a few smaller sections may be a little off (I used "squishy phrases" for them, if anyone can fill the blanks... problem is you can only go so far when it's a game where backstory is second). ''[[Marcus Kotare]]'': Paragraph syntax revision, refocused article to describe the character. Most sentences revised to fit the content changes, though appropriate elements were retained. Removed various segments that -I could not find to be supportable, and -stated opinions. Dates were conflicting (Captured in 3060, but his planet was invaded in 3059? Eh?) and removed to avoid the messy bits; no specific dates could be found for a few sections (by me at least). Citation needed on mentions of Clan Nova Cat - I can't verify the info one way or another at the moment, and I don't want to delete it, so it along with a few smaller sections may be a little off (I used "squishy phrases" for them, if anyone can fill the blanks... problem is you can only go so far when it's a game where backstory is second). − -Katherine Furey and Marcus Osis added as side characters on the smoke jag minor char page. Red links for Kotare eliminated.+ + '''[[Katherine Furey]]''' and '''Marcus Osis''': They're a bit tricky as they're minor characters in passing. I can grab as much info as I can for them and put out the most possible, as they're side referenced characters if nothing else and are red links. I'd be happy to get a size like the [[Burnell Wirth]] page. '''[[MechCommander (officer)]]''': A bit of a scattered page. I'd like to get it on track and be a bit better at presenting info. '''[[MechCommander (officer)]]''': A bit of a scattered page. I'd like to get it on track and be a bit better at presenting info.
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''[[Marcus Kotare]]'': Paragraph syntax revision, refocused article to describe the character. Most sentences revised to fit the content changes, though appropriate elements were retained. Removed various segments that -I could not find to be supportable, and -stated opinions. Dates were conflicting (Captured in 3060, but his planet was invaded in 3059? Eh?) and removed to avoid the messy bits; no specific dates could be found for a few sections (by me at least). Citation needed on mentions of Clan Nova Cat - I can't verify the info one way or another at the moment, and I don't want to delete it, so it along with a few smaller sections may be a little off (I used "squishy phrases" for them, if anyone can fill the blanks... problem is you can only go so far when it's a game where backstory is second). | ''[[Marcus Kotare]]'': Paragraph syntax revision, refocused article to describe the character. Most sentences revised to fit the content changes, though appropriate elements were retained. Removed various segments that -I could not find to be supportable, and -stated opinions. Dates were conflicting (Captured in 3060, but his planet was invaded in 3059? Eh?) and removed to avoid the messy bits; no specific dates could be found for a few sections (by me at least). Citation needed on mentions of Clan Nova Cat - I can't verify the info one way or another at the moment, and I don't want to delete it, so it along with a few smaller sections may be a little off (I used "squishy phrases" for them, if anyone can fill the blanks... problem is you can only go so far when it's a game where backstory is second). | ||
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| + | '''[[Katherine Furey]]''' and '''Marcus Osis''': They're a bit tricky as they're minor characters in passing. I can grab as much info as I can for them and put out the most possible, as they're side referenced characters if nothing else and are red links. I'd be happy to get a size like the [[Burnell Wirth]] page. | ||
'''[[MechCommander (officer)]]''': A bit of a scattered page. I'd like to get it on track and be a bit better at presenting info. | '''[[MechCommander (officer)]]''': A bit of a scattered page. I'd like to get it on track and be a bit better at presenting info. | ||