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Line 8: His opponent, [[Star Admiral]] Anta McKenna, accepted his bid and likewise included all of her forces in the coming Trial. The Viper battleship CSV ''[[Perigard Zalman (Individual Leviathan-class WarShip)|Perigard Zalman]]'' soon dominated the engagement zone, destroying any Raven or [[Clan Diamond Shark|Diamond Shark]] [[DropShip|DropShips]] and [[JumpShip|JumpShips]] within range of its batteries. After pelting the ''Perigard Zalman'' from long range and crippling the CSV ''[[Serpentes]]'', the Ravens mounted an assault on the ''Zalman'', intending to finish her off, only for the rest of Moffat's plan to unfold: the Star Adders then jumped in and aided the Vipers in crushing the Raven fleet. With this victory, Moffat had captured fifty JumpShips and almost eighty cargo DropShips in addition to the hulks of the defeated Raven WarShips.<ref name=WORp102/> His opponent, [[Star Admiral]] Anta McKenna, accepted his bid and likewise included all of her forces in the coming Trial. The Viper battleship CSV ''[[Perigard Zalman (Individual Leviathan-class WarShip)|Perigard Zalman]]'' soon dominated the engagement zone, destroying any Raven or [[Clan Diamond Shark|Diamond Shark]] [[DropShip|DropShips]] and [[JumpShip|JumpShips]] within range of its batteries. After pelting the ''Perigard Zalman'' from long range and crippling the CSV ''[[Serpentes]]'', the Ravens mounted an assault on the ''Zalman'', intending to finish her off, only for the rest of Moffat's plan to unfold: the Star Adders then jumped in and aided the Vipers in crushing the Raven fleet. With this victory, Moffat had captured fifty JumpShips and almost eighty cargo DropShips in addition to the hulks of the defeated Raven WarShips.<ref name=WORp102/> − Two and a half years later Moffat participated in Clan Steel Viper's assault against [[The Society|the Society's]] stronghold on [[Tamaron]]. In early December [[3074]] he oversaw the approach to the planet, using the ''Zalman's'' firepower to blast a path through the [[Clan Coyote|Coyote]] naval defenses and [[Space Defense System|SDS]] network. But as [[ilKhan]] [[Brett Andrews]] and the Viper DropShips began their landing, the CCS ''[[Ancestral Home]]'' tore the ''Perigard Zalman'' in half by detonating its [[Kearny-Fuchida Drive|K-F drive]].<ref name=WORp142>''The Wars of Reaving'', pp. 142–143: "Viper's Venom"</ref> + Two and a half years later Moffat participated in Clan Steel Viper's assault against [[The Society|the Society's]] stronghold on [[Tamaron]]. In early December [[3074]] he oversaw the approach to the planet, using the ''[[Perigard Zalman|Perigard Zalman's]]'' firepower to blast a path through the [[Clan Coyote|Coyote]] naval defenses and [[Space Defense System|SDS]] network. But as [[ilKhan]] [[Brett Andrews]] and the Viper DropShips began their landing, the CCS ''[[Ancestral Home]]'' tore the ''Perigard Zalman'' in half by detonating its [[Kearny-Fuchida Drive|K-F drive]].<ref name=WORp142>''The Wars of Reaving'', pp. 142–143: "Viper's Venom"</ref> ==Notes== ==Notes==
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His opponent, [[Star Admiral]] Anta McKenna, accepted his bid and likewise included all of her forces in the coming Trial. The Viper battleship CSV ''[[Perigard Zalman (Individual Leviathan-class WarShip)|Perigard Zalman]]'' soon dominated the engagement zone, destroying any Raven or [[Clan Diamond Shark|Diamond Shark]] [[DropShip|DropShips]] and [[JumpShip|JumpShips]] within range of its batteries. After pelting the ''Perigard Zalman'' from long range and crippling the CSV ''[[Serpentes]]'', the Ravens mounted an assault on the ''Zalman'', intending to finish her off, only for the rest of Moffat's plan to unfold: the Star Adders then jumped in and aided the Vipers in crushing the Raven fleet. With this victory, Moffat had captured fifty JumpShips and almost eighty cargo DropShips in addition to the hulks of the defeated Raven WarShips.<ref name=WORp102/> | His opponent, [[Star Admiral]] Anta McKenna, accepted his bid and likewise included all of her forces in the coming Trial. The Viper battleship CSV ''[[Perigard Zalman (Individual Leviathan-class WarShip)|Perigard Zalman]]'' soon dominated the engagement zone, destroying any Raven or [[Clan Diamond Shark|Diamond Shark]] [[DropShip|DropShips]] and [[JumpShip|JumpShips]] within range of its batteries. After pelting the ''Perigard Zalman'' from long range and crippling the CSV ''[[Serpentes]]'', the Ravens mounted an assault on the ''Zalman'', intending to finish her off, only for the rest of Moffat's plan to unfold: the Star Adders then jumped in and aided the Vipers in crushing the Raven fleet. With this victory, Moffat had captured fifty JumpShips and almost eighty cargo DropShips in addition to the hulks of the defeated Raven WarShips.<ref name=WORp102/> | ||
| − | Two and a half years later Moffat participated in Clan Steel Viper's assault against [[The Society|the Society's]] stronghold on [[Tamaron]]. In early December [[3074]] he oversaw the approach to the planet, using the ''Zalman's'' firepower to blast a path through the [[Clan Coyote|Coyote]] naval defenses and [[Space Defense System|SDS]] network. But as [[ilKhan]] [[Brett Andrews]] and the Viper DropShips began their landing, the CCS ''[[Ancestral Home]]'' tore the ''Perigard Zalman'' in half by detonating its [[Kearny-Fuchida Drive|K-F drive]].<ref name=WORp142>''The Wars of Reaving'', pp. 142–143: "Viper's Venom"</ref> | + | Two and a half years later Moffat participated in Clan Steel Viper's assault against [[The Society|the Society's]] stronghold on [[Tamaron]]. In early December [[3074]] he oversaw the approach to the planet, using the ''[[Perigard Zalman|Perigard Zalman's]]'' firepower to blast a path through the [[Clan Coyote|Coyote]] naval defenses and [[Space Defense System|SDS]] network. But as [[ilKhan]] [[Brett Andrews]] and the Viper DropShips began their landing, the CCS ''[[Ancestral Home]]'' tore the ''Perigard Zalman'' in half by detonating its [[Kearny-Fuchida Drive|K-F drive]].<ref name=WORp142>''The Wars of Reaving'', pp. 142–143: "Viper's Venom"</ref> |
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