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(I get the feeling I'm coming off as snarky. The internet desperately needs some way to convey tone of voice without resorting to emoticons.)
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Article reads clearly, no obvious errors. Remove cleanup? [[Special:Contributions/71.199.233.118|71.199.233.118]] 06:27, 18 July 2009 (UTC)
 
Article reads clearly, no obvious errors. Remove cleanup? [[Special:Contributions/71.199.233.118|71.199.233.118]] 06:27, 18 July 2009 (UTC)
 
:While at a glance it could probably stand to have more superfluous links and {{tl|citation needed}} templates, I'd say it's fine as is. Remember to be bold, young padawan. On second look there's one or two things not in-line with the Manual of Style, but it's hardly enough to warrant a {{tl|cleanup}} template. --[[User:Xoid|Xoid]] 06:37, 18 July 2009 (UTC)
 
:While at a glance it could probably stand to have more superfluous links and {{tl|citation needed}} templates, I'd say it's fine as is. Remember to be bold, young padawan. On second look there's one or two things not in-line with the Manual of Style, but it's hardly enough to warrant a {{tl|cleanup}} template. --[[User:Xoid|Xoid]] 06:37, 18 July 2009 (UTC)
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::{{emoticon|:)}} --<span style="font-family:Courier">[[User:Ebakunin|Ebakunin]]</span> <sup>([[User talk:Ebakunin|talk]]|[[Special:Contributions/Ebakunin|contribs]])</sup> 07:08, 18 July 2009 (UTC)

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Remove cleanup template?

Article reads clearly, no obvious errors. Remove cleanup? 71.199.233.118 06:27, 18 July 2009 (UTC)

While at a glance it could probably stand to have more superfluous links and {{citation needed}} templates, I'd say it's fine as is. Remember to be bold, young padawan. On second look there's one or two things not in-line with the Manual of Style, but it's hardly enough to warrant a {{cleanup}} template. --Xoid 06:37, 18 July 2009 (UTC)
Smiley.gif --Ebakunin (talk|contribs) 07:08, 18 July 2009 (UTC)