Talk:History of the Free Rasalhague Republic

Rewritten and consolidated first 3 sections into a History section. Need to add references and work on following sections to clear plagiarism tag Wookiebear 06:01, 2 February 2011 (UTC)

Are you having fun? --Revanche ^{(talk|contribs)} 12:15, 2 February 2011 (UTC)

Always if I can in any way help it Wookiebear 19:01, 2 February 2011 (UTC)

Re-wrote Government section. As above need to add references when I have them available Wookiebear 20:27, 2 February 2011 (UTC)

ok, rewrote Political section and consolidated. So far so good. Then accidentally over wrote wrong section along with the one I was doing, so undid my bad and fixed the part I wanted to originally fix. All in all not too bad a night.

The mouse has a mind of its own. It has allied with the fingers to make a mockery of my greatness. Bad mouse, no cheese or fritos for you tonight Wookiebear 03:50, 3 February 2011 (UTC)

Article Purpose

I feel the direction and purpose of the article should be reviewed, ideally it should only cover the history of the FRR (Inner Sphere (sourcebook) has the best overview all the way back to the Combine take-over of the region) and the sections detailing the government, economy could be used to help bulk out incredibly weak Free Rasalhague Republic article, and the KunsArme sections are large repeated on the KungsArme page.Cyc 21:29, 3 February 2011 (UTC)

I was actually considering that as I was doing some of the work in re-writting this article. We could tighten up the focus of the article considerably and move the other portions to the relevant pages as you specified above. Perhaps an brief overview with link would work in place of a complete section on Politics, Government, KungsArme and Economy. If this is would work for you all that would be great.

Perhaps focus this article on inception through the Combine era ending with the creation of the FRR would work? Wookiebear 21:49, 3 February 2011 (UTC)

The content of this article was taken wholesale from a sourcebook and made its way here. I think the best bet would be to blank the page and start from scratch with only "historical" information. I would humbly submit History of the Draconis Combine as an example to work from. --00:04, 4 February 2011 (UTC)

I wouldn't blank it. I think Wookiebear has done an extraordinary job of re-writing it so far. I do see value in merging it with the Free Rasalhague Republic article, as suggested.--Revanche ^{(talk|contribs)} 02:29, 4 February 2011 (UTC)

Have continued to re-write the sections of this article to clear the plagiarism. Am planning on hopefully getting this aspect of the process done this weekend and getting the references in at the same time. I am more than willing to work towards a merge of articles as needed to strengthen all and will do what I can to help Wookiebear 19:56, 4 February 2011 (UTC)