Sarna News: Bad 'Mechs - Icestorm

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This is a short story from Blain Lee Pardoe, that was published and released on a kickstarter from catalyst was just trying to add accurate information from the story since nothing was there at the beginning and is the information we have suggesting the 331st RBD/Clan Wolverine is still out there.
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I see Sorry I am new to this and just wanted to get the information out there, There isn't much information on the pilot for the character reference to be filled out, just statements made in the article of wounds and talk of the group he is with everything come out of the short story Redemption and Malice, any changes you might think is needed ill leave alone thought it was a error i was getting sorry.

Revision as of 15:50, 24 August 2022

Multiple issues

While this is a decent start at an article, there are several recommendations I can make to improve this article. I initially put a multiple issues tag on the article, but it keeps on getting removed.

  • Recommendation issue 1: This is a character article, so it might be a good idea to use the template for character articles found here: https://www.sarna.net/wiki/Help:CreateCharacterArticle. (I was originally going to use a cleanup tag for issue 1.
  • Recommendation issue 2: Please include the canon sources for this article's statements. This article needs canon references as per https://www.sarna.net/wiki/Help:References. (I was originally going to use a refimprove tag for issue 2)

Thanks!

75.23.228.139 12:44, 24 August 2022 (EDT)


I see Sorry I am new to this and just wanted to get the information out there, There isn't much information on the pilot for the character reference to be filled out, just statements made in the article of wounds and talk of the group he is with everything come out of the short story Redemption and Malice, any changes you might think is needed ill leave alone thought it was a error i was getting sorry.