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He did pick NAIS graduates of the class of 3048 for his VRPP project > He picked NAIS graduates from the class of [[3048]] for his VRPP project (seems less clunky to me){{Unsigned|Deric strider |07:11, 18 July 2021 }} | He did pick NAIS graduates of the class of 3048 for his VRPP project > He picked NAIS graduates from the class of [[3048]] for his VRPP project (seems less clunky to me){{Unsigned|Deric strider |07:11, 18 July 2021 }} | ||
:I ''suspect'' the i is missing a letter and should read "in". Your other points are reasonable. Just be bold and edit them in. This is a wiki, after all. ;) [[User:Frabby|Frabby]] ([[User talk:Frabby|talk]]) 15:10, 18 July 2021 (EDT) | :I ''suspect'' the i is missing a letter and should read "in". Your other points are reasonable. Just be bold and edit them in. This is a wiki, after all. ;) [[User:Frabby|Frabby]] ([[User talk:Frabby|talk]]) 15:10, 18 July 2021 (EDT) | ||
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some text needs to be made clear ie "His groundbreaking research i advanced neurohelmet earned him a post as Senior Project Developer for the NAIS[2] and a place in history.[1]" Is the i meaning it was the MK I of advance neurohelmets? or is the i a typo?
suggested minor edits: He did pick NAIS graduates of the class of 3048 for his VRPP project > He picked NAIS graduates from the class of 3048 for his VRPP project (seems less clunky to me)— The preceding unsigned comment was posted by Deric strider (talk • contribs) 07:11, 18 July 2021 .
- I suspect the i is missing a letter and should read "in". Your other points are reasonable. Just be bold and edit them in. This is a wiki, after all. ;) Frabby (talk) 15:10, 18 July 2021 (EDT)
Completed minor changes typos and some changes to make easier reading.