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Line 23: By 17 October [[3049]] he, like other survivors of the [[Oberon Guards]], is put through physical exercise by his [[Clan Wolf]] captors despite his obesity (self-described as "almost 160 kilos"). Together with his sons [[Johann Grimm|Johann]] and [[Karl Grimm|Karl]], Hendrik immediately begins to hatch an escape plan from their cells at Grimfort, having prepared contingency plans for all kinds of situations to always stay one step ahead of his enemies in this cutthroat world of periphery pirates. He has not even informed his sons of the Zeta cache that he intends to utilize to throw off the Clan Wolf garrison once the frontline units leave. By 17 October [[3049]] he, like other survivors of the [[Oberon Guards]], is put through physical exercise by his [[Clan Wolf]] captors despite his obesity (self-described as "almost 160 kilos"). Together with his sons [[Johann Grimm|Johann]] and [[Karl Grimm|Karl]], Hendrik immediately begins to hatch an escape plan from their cells at Grimfort, having prepared contingency plans for all kinds of situations to always stay one step ahead of his enemies in this cutthroat world of periphery pirates. He has not even informed his sons of the Zeta cache that he intends to utilize to throw off the Clan Wolf garrison once the frontline units leave. − Although he fails to understand who the Clans really are, falsely believing them to be a secret [[Com Guards|Com Guard]] force, from their questioning he has learned they intend to move on into the [[Inner Sphere]] and correctly deduces that they are not truly interested in Oberon VI and will only leave a small garrison behind. + Although he fails to understand who the Clans really are, falsely believing them to be a secret [[Com Guards]] force, from their questioning he has learned they intend to move on into the [[Inner Sphere]] and correctly deduces that they are not truly interested in Oberon VI and will only leave a small garrison behind. Mere hours after most of the troops leave on 26 November 3049, Grimm and his followers stage a successful prison breakout and, helped by a secret minefield Grimm had installed in the city, narrowly escape to the Black Jackrabbit hills, where a company of mothballed vintage [[Rim Worlds Republic]] [[BattleMech]]s awaits them in Zeta cache. Both Johann and Karl are not particularly happy that they knew of neither the minefield nor the Zeta cache. Johann tries to persuade his father to flee off-world, but Hendrik Grimm will have none of it. He wants to crush the attackers on Oberon VI while he has the initiative. He also contacts Precentor Rodrick, whom he had subverted years ago, and upon learning that the invaders have fixed the transmission problem on the world's [[hyperpulse generator]], orders a message sent to his daughter [[Ella Grimm]], who is currently off-world. Mere hours after most of the troops leave on 26 November 3049, Grimm and his followers stage a successful prison breakout and, helped by a secret minefield Grimm had installed in the city, narrowly escape to the Black Jackrabbit hills, where a company of mothballed vintage [[Rim Worlds Republic]] [[BattleMech]]s awaits them in Zeta cache. Both Johann and Karl are not particularly happy that they knew of neither the minefield nor the Zeta cache. Johann tries to persuade his father to flee off-world, but Hendrik Grimm will have none of it. He wants to crush the attackers on Oberon VI while he has the initiative. He also contacts Precentor Rodrick, whom he had subverted years ago, and upon learning that the invaders have fixed the transmission problem on the world's [[hyperpulse generator]], orders a message sent to his daughter [[Ella Grimm]], who is currently off-world.
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By 17 October [[3049]] he, like other survivors of the [[Oberon Guards]], is put through physical exercise by his [[Clan Wolf]] captors despite his obesity (self-described as "almost 160 kilos"). Together with his sons [[Johann Grimm|Johann]] and [[Karl Grimm|Karl]], Hendrik immediately begins to hatch an escape plan from their cells at Grimfort, having prepared contingency plans for all kinds of situations to always stay one step ahead of his enemies in this cutthroat world of periphery pirates. He has not even informed his sons of the Zeta cache that he intends to utilize to throw off the Clan Wolf garrison once the frontline units leave. | By 17 October [[3049]] he, like other survivors of the [[Oberon Guards]], is put through physical exercise by his [[Clan Wolf]] captors despite his obesity (self-described as "almost 160 kilos"). Together with his sons [[Johann Grimm|Johann]] and [[Karl Grimm|Karl]], Hendrik immediately begins to hatch an escape plan from their cells at Grimfort, having prepared contingency plans for all kinds of situations to always stay one step ahead of his enemies in this cutthroat world of periphery pirates. He has not even informed his sons of the Zeta cache that he intends to utilize to throw off the Clan Wolf garrison once the frontline units leave. | ||
| − | Although he fails to understand who the Clans really are, falsely believing them to be a secret [[Com Guards | + | Although he fails to understand who the Clans really are, falsely believing them to be a secret [[Com Guards]] force, from their questioning he has learned they intend to move on into the [[Inner Sphere]] and correctly deduces that they are not truly interested in Oberon VI and will only leave a small garrison behind. |
Mere hours after most of the troops leave on 26 November 3049, Grimm and his followers stage a successful prison breakout and, helped by a secret minefield Grimm had installed in the city, narrowly escape to the Black Jackrabbit hills, where a company of mothballed vintage [[Rim Worlds Republic]] [[BattleMech]]s awaits them in Zeta cache. Both Johann and Karl are not particularly happy that they knew of neither the minefield nor the Zeta cache. Johann tries to persuade his father to flee off-world, but Hendrik Grimm will have none of it. He wants to crush the attackers on Oberon VI while he has the initiative. He also contacts Precentor Rodrick, whom he had subverted years ago, and upon learning that the invaders have fixed the transmission problem on the world's [[hyperpulse generator]], orders a message sent to his daughter [[Ella Grimm]], who is currently off-world. | Mere hours after most of the troops leave on 26 November 3049, Grimm and his followers stage a successful prison breakout and, helped by a secret minefield Grimm had installed in the city, narrowly escape to the Black Jackrabbit hills, where a company of mothballed vintage [[Rim Worlds Republic]] [[BattleMech]]s awaits them in Zeta cache. Both Johann and Karl are not particularly happy that they knew of neither the minefield nor the Zeta cache. Johann tries to persuade his father to flee off-world, but Hendrik Grimm will have none of it. He wants to crush the attackers on Oberon VI while he has the initiative. He also contacts Precentor Rodrick, whom he had subverted years ago, and upon learning that the invaders have fixed the transmission problem on the world's [[hyperpulse generator]], orders a message sent to his daughter [[Ella Grimm]], who is currently off-world. | ||