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Line 17: ==Plot summary== ==Plot summary== − During the [[Word of Blake Jihad]], [[Clan Ghost Bear]] MechWarrior Claudio is attempting to create his own [[Great Work (tradition)|Great Work]], without success, after trying several classes of art. Without 'mech, he had been left dispossessed, and was assigned a salvaged Federated Suns ''Osiris''. After turning it on, he uncovers it has a digital assistant named ''Hikaru'', and the 'Mech itself is plagued with problems. Without any technician available, he had to attempt to solve the problems himself. + During the [[Word of Blake Jihad]], [[Clan Ghost Bear]] MechWarrior Claudio is attempting to create his own [[Great Work]], without success, after trying several classes of art. Without 'mech, he had been left disposessed, and was assigned a salvaged Federated Suns ''Osiris''. After turning it on, he uncovers it has a digital assistant named ''Hikaru'', and the 'Mech itself is plagued with problems. Without any technician available, he had to attempt to solve the problems himself. − Months later, after he had been promoted to [[Star Commander]], he was still fighting to solve the Osiris' software problems, and had to learn how to do it. + Months later, after he had been prtomoted to [[Star Commander]], he was still fighting to solve the Osiris' software problems, and had to learn how to do it. A year later, Claudio had reached the rank of [[Star Captain]], and still hadn't solved all the Osiris' problems. After his tech made a reset of the 'Mech, Claudio reinstalls Hikaru, as he had began appreciating her. A year later, Claudio had reached the rank of [[Star Captain]], and still hadn't solved all the Osiris' problems. After his tech made a reset of the 'Mech, Claudio reinstalls Hikaru, as he had began appreciating her. − Five years later, after now Major Claudio Vong retires from the 'Bears touman, immigrating to the [[Republic of the Sphere]], he finally presents his Great Work: his finally tamed 'Mech, which he has named, precisely, ''Great Work''. + Five years later, after now Major Claudio Vong retires from the 'Bears touman, immigrating to the [[Republic of the Sphere]], he finally presents his Great Work: hisw finally tamed 'Mech, which he has named, precisely, ''Great Work''. At the eve of [[IlClan Trial]], the [[Clan Jade Falcon]] Warrior Edward is assigned to the Great Work 'Mech, salvaged from the Republic forces, and saw himself assaulted by Hikaru's apparition and a cacophony of classic music while he goes to the fight. At the eve of [[IlClan Trial]], the [[Clan Jade Falcon]] Warrior Edward is assigned to the Great Work 'Mech, salvaged from the Republic forces, and saw himself assaulted by Hikaru's apparition and a cacophony of classic music while he goes to the fight.
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| − | During the [[Word of Blake Jihad]], [[Clan Ghost Bear]] MechWarrior Claudio is attempting to create his own [[ | + | During the [[Word of Blake Jihad]], [[Clan Ghost Bear]] MechWarrior Claudio is attempting to create his own [[Great Work]], without success, after trying several classes of art. Without 'mech, he had been left disposessed, and was assigned a salvaged Federated Suns ''Osiris''. After turning it on, he uncovers it has a digital assistant named ''Hikaru'', and the 'Mech itself is plagued with problems. Without any technician available, he had to attempt to solve the problems himself. |
| − | Months later, after he had been | + | Months later, after he had been prtomoted to [[Star Commander]], he was still fighting to solve the Osiris' software problems, and had to learn how to do it. |
A year later, Claudio had reached the rank of [[Star Captain]], and still hadn't solved all the Osiris' problems. After his tech made a reset of the 'Mech, Claudio reinstalls Hikaru, as he had began appreciating her. | A year later, Claudio had reached the rank of [[Star Captain]], and still hadn't solved all the Osiris' problems. After his tech made a reset of the 'Mech, Claudio reinstalls Hikaru, as he had began appreciating her. | ||
| − | Five years later, after now Major Claudio Vong retires from the 'Bears touman, immigrating to the [[Republic of the Sphere]], he finally presents his Great Work: | + | Five years later, after now Major Claudio Vong retires from the 'Bears touman, immigrating to the [[Republic of the Sphere]], he finally presents his Great Work: hisw finally tamed 'Mech, which he has named, precisely, ''Great Work''. |
At the eve of [[IlClan Trial]], the [[Clan Jade Falcon]] Warrior Edward is assigned to the Great Work 'Mech, salvaged from the Republic forces, and saw himself assaulted by Hikaru's apparition and a cacophony of classic music while he goes to the fight. | At the eve of [[IlClan Trial]], the [[Clan Jade Falcon]] Warrior Edward is assigned to the Great Work 'Mech, salvaged from the Republic forces, and saw himself assaulted by Hikaru's apparition and a cacophony of classic music while he goes to the fight. | ||