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I feel the direction and purpose of the article should be reviewed, ideally it should only cover the history of the FRR ([[Inner Sphere (sourcebook)]] has the best overview all the way back to the Combine take-over of the region) and the sections detailing the government, economy could be used to help bulk out incredibly weak [[Free Rasalhague Republic]] article, and the KunsArme sections are large repeated on the [[KungsArme]] page.[[User:Cyc|Cyc]] 21:29, 3 February 2011 (UTC) | I feel the direction and purpose of the article should be reviewed, ideally it should only cover the history of the FRR ([[Inner Sphere (sourcebook)]] has the best overview all the way back to the Combine take-over of the region) and the sections detailing the government, economy could be used to help bulk out incredibly weak [[Free Rasalhague Republic]] article, and the KunsArme sections are large repeated on the [[KungsArme]] page.[[User:Cyc|Cyc]] 21:29, 3 February 2011 (UTC) | ||
| + | : I was actually considering that as I was doing some of the work in re-writting this article. We could tighten up the focus of the article considerably and move the other portions to the relevant pages as you specified above. Perhaps an brief overview with link would work in place of a complete section on Politics, Government, KungsArme and Economy. If this is would work for you all that would be great. | ||
| + | : Perhaps focus this article on inception through the Combine era ending with the creation of the FRR would work? [[User:Wookiebear|Wookiebear]] 21:49, 3 February 2011 (UTC) | ||
Revision as of 17:49, 3 February 2011
Rewritten and consolidated first 3 sections into a History section. Need to add references and work on following sections to clear plagiarism tag Wookiebear 06:01, 2 February 2011 (UTC)
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Wookiebear 19:01, 2 February 2011 (UTC)
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Re-wrote Government section. As above need to add references when I have them available Wookiebear 20:27, 2 February 2011 (UTC)
ok, rewrote Political section and consolidated. So far so good. Then accidentally over wrote wrong section along with the one I was doing, so undid my bad and fixed the part I wanted to originally fix. All in all not too bad a night.
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Article Purpose
I feel the direction and purpose of the article should be reviewed, ideally it should only cover the history of the FRR (Inner Sphere (sourcebook) has the best overview all the way back to the Combine take-over of the region) and the sections detailing the government, economy could be used to help bulk out incredibly weak Free Rasalhague Republic article, and the KunsArme sections are large repeated on the KungsArme page.Cyc 21:29, 3 February 2011 (UTC)
- I was actually considering that as I was doing some of the work in re-writting this article. We could tighten up the focus of the article considerably and move the other portions to the relevant pages as you specified above. Perhaps an brief overview with link would work in place of a complete section on Politics, Government, KungsArme and Economy. If this is would work for you all that would be great.
- Perhaps focus this article on inception through the Combine era ending with the creation of the FRR would work? Wookiebear 21:49, 3 February 2011 (UTC)