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Line 24: Considered by some to be young, reckless and arrogant, Altman was however still at his core an expert MechWarrior. His reputation arose due to a tendency to be excitable and impulsive, often going on the offensive before a true threat materializes, plunging into conflict with an almost reflexive spontaneity. Mixing reprimands with commendations for his initiative, Altman himself credited his sudden outbursts to a certain sixth sense, which at least of [[3133]] had yet to cause any major misfortunes to befall him.<ref name=MDADPC></ref> Considered by some to be young, reckless and arrogant, Altman was however still at his core an expert MechWarrior. His reputation arose due to a tendency to be excitable and impulsive, often going on the offensive before a true threat materializes, plunging into conflict with an almost reflexive spontaneity. Mixing reprimands with commendations for his initiative, Altman himself credited his sudden outbursts to a certain sixth sense, which at least of [[3133]] had yet to cause any major misfortunes to befall him.<ref name=MDADPC></ref> − At that time, Altman served in a [[Lance]], which was under the command of [[Hoa Phiri]].<ref name=MDALID>''MechWarrior: Dark Age - Liao Incursion Dossiers'', Vincent Altman Dossier</ref> With Warrior House Dai Da Chi, Altman fought against the [[Republic of the Sphere]] aligned [[Northwind Fusiliers]] on [[Algol]] under the command of a ''[[Lien-zhang]]'' Markosovich, including in the ruins of an old [[AFFS]] Munitions Depot near Groffer’s Toll against enemies including [[Claretha Francis]]. In this engagement Altman's impulsiveness got the better of him, resulting in him being drawn out of the Capellan battleline in an attempt to chase what appeared to be Highlander flankers, only to create a gap which the Republic forces were able to exploit.<ref name=BoA></ref> + At that time, Altman served in a [[Lance]], which was under the commander of [[Hoa Phiri]].<ref name=MDALID>''MechWarrior: Dark Age - Liao Incursion Dossiers'', Vincent Altman Dossier</ref> With Warrior House Dai Da Chi, Altman fought against the [[Republic of the Sphere]] aligned [[Northwind Fusiliers]] on [[Algol]] under the command of a ''[[Lien-zhang]]'' Markosovich, including in the ruins of an old [[AFFS]] Munitions Depot near Groffer’s Toll against enemies including [[Claretha Francis]]. In this engagement Altman's impulsiveness got the better of him, resulting in him being drawn out of the Capellan battleline in an attempt to chase what appeared to be Highlander flankers, only to create a gap which the Republic forces were able to exploit.<ref name=BoA></ref> ==BattleMech== ==BattleMech==
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Considered by some to be young, reckless and arrogant, Altman was however still at his core an expert MechWarrior. His reputation arose due to a tendency to be excitable and impulsive, often going on the offensive before a true threat materializes, plunging into conflict with an almost reflexive spontaneity. Mixing reprimands with commendations for his initiative, Altman himself credited his sudden outbursts to a certain sixth sense, which at least of [[3133]] had yet to cause any major misfortunes to befall him.<ref name=MDADPC></ref> | Considered by some to be young, reckless and arrogant, Altman was however still at his core an expert MechWarrior. His reputation arose due to a tendency to be excitable and impulsive, often going on the offensive before a true threat materializes, plunging into conflict with an almost reflexive spontaneity. Mixing reprimands with commendations for his initiative, Altman himself credited his sudden outbursts to a certain sixth sense, which at least of [[3133]] had yet to cause any major misfortunes to befall him.<ref name=MDADPC></ref> | ||
| − | At that time, Altman served in a [[Lance]], which was under the | + | At that time, Altman served in a [[Lance]], which was under the commander of [[Hoa Phiri]].<ref name=MDALID>''MechWarrior: Dark Age - Liao Incursion Dossiers'', Vincent Altman Dossier</ref> With Warrior House Dai Da Chi, Altman fought against the [[Republic of the Sphere]] aligned [[Northwind Fusiliers]] on [[Algol]] under the command of a ''[[Lien-zhang]]'' Markosovich, including in the ruins of an old [[AFFS]] Munitions Depot near Groffer’s Toll against enemies including [[Claretha Francis]]. In this engagement Altman's impulsiveness got the better of him, resulting in him being drawn out of the Capellan battleline in an attempt to chase what appeared to be Highlander flankers, only to create a gap which the Republic forces were able to exploit.<ref name=BoA></ref> |
==BattleMech== | ==BattleMech== | ||