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Line 14: ==Plot summary== ==Plot summary== − In August 2990, young Brandon O'Leary was on his father Michael's ''Leopard''-class DropShip ''[[Ceridwen]]'' on Hesperus II. Michael, the CEO of [[Mountain Wolf BattleMechs]], was on a business trip, and when the boy asked him when they could go home, Michael said they were at it, in the DropShip. The father later ignored his son while making a call. Brandon began playing with toy BattleMechs, like those their family produced, and his father interrupted his game to laugh hardly of him, making his son to cry.+ On August 2990, the young Brandon O'Leary was on his father Michael's [[Ceridwen]]'s Leopard-class Dropship, on Hesperus II. The man, the CEO of [[Mountain Wolf BattleMechs]], was in a business trip, and when the boy ask him when they can go home, Michael said they were at it, in the DropShip. The father later ignored his son while making a call. Brandon later began playing with toy BattleMechs, like those their family produced, and his father interrupted his game to laugh hardly of him, making his son to cry. + Seven years later, Brandon was on Alpheratz IV, capital of the [[Outworlds Alliance]], piloting a ''Nigh Hawk''. Despite having only fourteen years, he knew how to pilot it, making a presentation to Ronaine Avellar, the dirigent of the Alliance. His father attempts to impress the President, but he talked too much and wasn't able to admit his limitations. That made Brandon angrier, and fight the 'mech in the test as posessed. But Michael failed to convince the president, and after the test, he blamed his son. Brandon, tired of his refusal to admit his mistakes, discussed with his father, which put at end to the conversation hiting his son. + In 2999, Brandon and his father were on the Winter Holiday, a noble party celebrating a noble marriage, on Vendrell, their family's traditional home. Brandon was wearing the clothes of a [[MechWarrior]], while his father was attempting to make deals with lyran officers... again, without much success. Seeing his father's pitiful act enraged Brandon, which began drinking, and later asked a dance to a young woman. She reluctantly agreed, and while they dances, they talked precisely about Michael's bad reputation. When she uncovered than she had been talking bad about Brandon's father, she felt embarassed. Then, Brandon uncovered than he had been dancing with Olivia Hart, the wive. Her fiancee felt insulted and despite Brandon's excuses, he knocked him out unconscious. − Seven years later, Brandon was on Alpheratz IV, capital of the [[Outworlds Alliance]], piloting a ''Night Hawk''. Despite being only fourteen years old, he knew how to pilot it, making a presentation to [[Ronaine Avellar]], the president of the Alliance. His father attempted to impress the President, but he talked too much and wasn't able to admit his limitations. This made Brandon angrier, and he fought in the test as though possessed. Michael failed to convince the president, and after the test, he blamed his son. Brandon, tired of Michael's refusal to admit his mistakes, argued with his father, who put an end to the conversation by hitting his son.+ Eleven years later, Brandon was on the family's DropShip, the ''Ceridwen''. His father had passed soon before, leaving him as the new CEO of Mountain Wolf, and empty shell, but Brandon was determined to make what his father always dreamed: to turn it into a real pmanufacturing company. For this, he began writing messages, to answer those which he had received to give him his condolences about his father's death. − + Brandon proved how much had learned from his father, both about how to do business and how to don't do them: in the generic messages, he promoted the new [[BattleMech]] his company will began producing: the ''Merlin''. − In 2999, Brandon and his father were on the Winter Holiday, a noble party celebrating a noble marriage, on Vendrell, their family's traditional home. Brandon was wearing the clothes of a [[MechWarrior]], while his father was attempting to make deals with Lyran officers; once again without much success. Seeing his father's pitiful act enraged Brandon, who began drinking, and later he asked a young woman to dance. She reluctantly agreed, and while they danced, they talked precisely about Michael's bad reputation. When she discovered that she had been insulting Brandon's father, she felt embarrassed. Then, Brandon realized that he had been dancing with Olivia Hart, the bride-to-be. Her fiancé felt insulted and despite Brandon's excuses, he knocked Brandon unconscious.+ In a message to the recent widow Olivia Hart, he indirectly asked her to marry him. − + And in his message to Ronaine Avellar, he talked her about the Merlin, offered her a succulent deal to began producing them, benefiting both, and even said her how soon will be marrying Olivia. − Eleven years later, Brandon was on the family's DropShip, the ''Ceridwen''. His father had recently passed away, leaving him the new CEO of Mountain Wolf – an empty shell – but Brandon was determined to achieve what his father always dreamed of, to turn it into a real manufacturing company. He began writing messages to answer those from whom he had received condolences on his father's death. + After finishing his messages, Brandon felt very confindent, sure than he finally may had found himself a way home. − − Brandon proved how much he had learned from his father, both about how to do business and how not to. In most messages, he promoted the new [[BattleMech]] his company would began producing, the ''Merlin''; in a message to the recent widow Olivia Hart, he indirectly asked her to marry him; and in his message to Ronaine Avellar, he told her about the ''Merlin'', offering her a good deal to begin producing them, benefiting both, and even told her how soon he would be marrying Olivia. − − After finishing his messages, Brandon felt very confident, sure that he might finally have found himself a way home. ==Featured characters== ==Featured characters== − * [[Ronaine Avellar]] + * [[Brandon O'Leary]] * [[Cassandra Fox]] * [[Cassandra Fox]] + * [[Michael O'Leary]] * [[Olivia Hart]] * [[Olivia Hart]] − * [[Brandon O'Leary]] + * [[Ronaine Avellar]] − * [[Michael O'Leary]] * [[Sebastian Rippon]] * [[Sebastian Rippon]] ==Featured BattleTech== ==Featured BattleTech== − * ''[[Merlin (BattleMech)|Merlin]]'' + * [[Night Hawk]] − * ''[[Night Hawk]]'' + * [[Sling]] (mentioned) − * ''[[Sling]]'' (mentioned) + * [[Merlin (BattleMech)]] − * ''[[Leopard]]''-class DropShip + * [[Leopard]] DropShip ==Featured planets== ==Featured planets==
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==Plot summary== | ==Plot summary== | ||
| − | + | On August 2990, the young Brandon O'Leary was on his father Michael's [[Ceridwen]]'s Leopard-class Dropship, on Hesperus II. The man, the CEO of [[Mountain Wolf BattleMechs]], was in a business trip, and when the boy ask him when they can go home, Michael said they were at it, in the DropShip. The father later ignored his son while making a call. Brandon later began playing with toy BattleMechs, like those their family produced, and his father interrupted his game to laugh hardly of him, making his son to cry. | |
| + | Seven years later, Brandon was on Alpheratz IV, capital of the [[Outworlds Alliance]], piloting a ''Nigh Hawk''. Despite having only fourteen years, he knew how to pilot it, making a presentation to Ronaine Avellar, the dirigent of the Alliance. His father attempts to impress the President, but he talked too much and wasn't able to admit his limitations. That made Brandon angrier, and fight the 'mech in the test as posessed. But Michael failed to convince the president, and after the test, he blamed his son. Brandon, tired of his refusal to admit his mistakes, discussed with his father, which put at end to the conversation hiting his son. | ||
| + | In 2999, Brandon and his father were on the Winter Holiday, a noble party celebrating a noble marriage, on Vendrell, their family's traditional home. Brandon was wearing the clothes of a [[MechWarrior]], while his father was attempting to make deals with lyran officers... again, without much success. Seeing his father's pitiful act enraged Brandon, which began drinking, and later asked a dance to a young woman. She reluctantly agreed, and while they dances, they talked precisely about Michael's bad reputation. When she uncovered than she had been talking bad about Brandon's father, she felt embarassed. Then, Brandon uncovered than he had been dancing with Olivia Hart, the wive. Her fiancee felt insulted and despite Brandon's excuses, he knocked him out unconscious. | ||
| − | + | Eleven years later, Brandon was on the family's DropShip, the ''Ceridwen''. His father had passed soon before, leaving him as the new CEO of Mountain Wolf, and empty shell, but Brandon was determined to make what his father always dreamed: to turn it into a real pmanufacturing company. For this, he began writing messages, to answer those which he had received to give him his condolences about his father's death. | |
| − | + | Brandon proved how much had learned from his father, both about how to do business and how to don't do them: in the generic messages, he promoted the new [[BattleMech]] his company will began producing: the ''Merlin''. | |
| − | + | In a message to the recent widow Olivia Hart, he indirectly asked her to marry him. | |
| − | + | And in his message to Ronaine Avellar, he talked her about the Merlin, offered her a succulent deal to began producing them, benefiting both, and even said her how soon will be marrying Olivia. | |
| − | Eleven years later, Brandon was on the family's DropShip, the ''Ceridwen''. His father had | + | After finishing his messages, Brandon felt very confindent, sure than he finally may had found himself a way home. |
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| − | Brandon proved how much | ||
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| − | After finishing his messages, Brandon felt very | ||
==Featured characters== | ==Featured characters== | ||
| − | * [[ | + | * [[Brandon O'Leary]] |
* [[Cassandra Fox]] | * [[Cassandra Fox]] | ||
| + | * [[Michael O'Leary]] | ||
* [[Olivia Hart]] | * [[Olivia Hart]] | ||
| − | * [[ | + | * [[Ronaine Avellar]] |
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* [[Sebastian Rippon]] | * [[Sebastian Rippon]] | ||
==Featured BattleTech== | ==Featured BattleTech== | ||
| − | * | + | * [[Night Hawk]] |
| − | * | + | * [[Sling]] (mentioned) |
| − | * | + | * [[Merlin (BattleMech)]] |
| − | * | + | * [[Leopard]] DropShip |
==Featured planets== | ==Featured planets== | ||