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The quiet night is interrupted by intruders, two stealth-suited infiltrators. The first killed Sol before fighting Rearden with her monomolecular-edged sword, and in a stroke of luck, Rearden killed her with her own sword. Her nearly-invisible unit flash revealed her to be a Draconis agent. While fleeing, though, Rearden loses his arm to the other infiltrator, falling unconscious. He would later wake up hospitalized.
 
The quiet night is interrupted by intruders, two stealth-suited infiltrators. The first killed Sol before fighting Rearden with her monomolecular-edged sword, and in a stroke of luck, Rearden killed her with her own sword. Her nearly-invisible unit flash revealed her to be a Draconis agent. While fleeing, though, Rearden loses his arm to the other infiltrator, falling unconscious. He would later wake up hospitalized.
  
Months later, [[Maskirovka]] asset Mickey Rearden and his handler listen to his report as part of a debriefing. Rearden's report earned him medals, a promotion, and a pension from the [[Federated Suns]]. He had accurately unmasked the successful theft of the overcompensator as a Draconis operation, but secretly he had been part of a Capellan plan to steal the same device. His duties for the Maskirovka are to continue.
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Months later, [[Maskirovka]] asset Micky Rearden and his handler listen to his report as part of a debriefing. Rearden's report earned him medals, a promotion, and a pension from the [[Federated Suns]]. He had accurately unmasked the successful theft of the overcompensator as a Draconis operation, but secretly he had been part of a Capellan plan to steal the same device. His duties for the Maskirovka are to continue.
  
 
Rearden, by his narration, never hears from his handler again.
 
Rearden, by his narration, never hears from his handler again.

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