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Line 25: The 1 June, both friends were in a [[Clan Sea Fox]] salvage facility. Jack choose a [[Clan Jade Falcon]]'s Dire Wolf as ''isorla'', and Mia, after seeing a intact Atlas II, choosed it for herself. The 1 June, both friends were in a [[Clan Sea Fox]] salvage facility. Jack choose a [[Clan Jade Falcon]]'s Dire Wolf as ''isorla'', and Mia, after seeing a intact Atlas II, choosed it for herself. A day later, Justin hall, former Knight of the Republic, visited them and asked them to allow them to join them. In exchange, he offered them their services and talents as agent... and said to know a way to obtain a great deal of money. A day later, Justin hall, former Knight of the Republic, visited them and asked them to allow them to join them. In exchange, he offered them their services and talents as agent... and said to know a way to obtain a great deal of money. − The way implied a meeting with a [[MI6]] agent which made himself call ''Weatherbee''. He gave them a packet of intel he had been stockpiling for fifteen years, whilst trapped behind [[the Wall]], promising them a huge reward if they gave it to a Federated Suns' embassy, and also a deadly punishment if they didn't deliver it. + The way implied a meeting with a [[MI6]] agent which made himself call ''Weatherbee''. He gave them a packet of intel he had been stockpiling for fifteen years, whhen he was trapped behind [[the Wall]], promising them a huge reward if they gave it to a Federated Suns' embassy, and also a deadly punishment if they didn't deliver it. The 6 June, the three were, with their two 'Mechs, onboard a Sea Fox DropShip, departing from Terra. Mia informed Jack and Justin than she had uncovered than her Atlas II was ''Phantom'', Devlin Stone's personnal 'Mech. The 6 June, the three were, with their two 'Mechs, onboard a Sea Fox DropShip, departing from Terra. Mia informed Jack and Justin than she had uncovered than her Atlas II was ''Phantom'', Devlin Stone's personnal 'Mech. The 9 July, the trio arrived to Galatea, but they expectatives to find a mercenary unit to enlist failed, as the planet was filled with ex-RAF soldiers. So Jack decided to form their own merc unit. After delivering the package into the Federated Suns' embassy, they negotiated with a Suns' agent, convincing her. The 9 July, the trio arrived to Galatea, but they expectatives to find a mercenary unit to enlist failed, as the planet was filled with ex-RAF soldiers. So Jack decided to form their own merc unit. After delivering the package into the Federated Suns' embassy, they negotiated with a Suns' agent, convincing her.
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The 1 June, both friends were in a [[Clan Sea Fox]] salvage facility. Jack choose a [[Clan Jade Falcon]]'s Dire Wolf as ''isorla'', and Mia, after seeing a intact Atlas II, choosed it for herself. | The 1 June, both friends were in a [[Clan Sea Fox]] salvage facility. Jack choose a [[Clan Jade Falcon]]'s Dire Wolf as ''isorla'', and Mia, after seeing a intact Atlas II, choosed it for herself. | ||
A day later, Justin hall, former Knight of the Republic, visited them and asked them to allow them to join them. In exchange, he offered them their services and talents as agent... and said to know a way to obtain a great deal of money. | A day later, Justin hall, former Knight of the Republic, visited them and asked them to allow them to join them. In exchange, he offered them their services and talents as agent... and said to know a way to obtain a great deal of money. | ||
| − | The way implied a meeting with a [[MI6]] agent which made himself call ''Weatherbee''. He gave them a packet of intel he had been stockpiling for fifteen years, | + | The way implied a meeting with a [[MI6]] agent which made himself call ''Weatherbee''. He gave them a packet of intel he had been stockpiling for fifteen years, whhen he was trapped behind [[the Wall]], promising them a huge reward if they gave it to a Federated Suns' embassy, and also a deadly punishment if they didn't deliver it. |
The 6 June, the three were, with their two 'Mechs, onboard a Sea Fox DropShip, departing from Terra. Mia informed Jack and Justin than she had uncovered than her Atlas II was ''Phantom'', Devlin Stone's personnal 'Mech. | The 6 June, the three were, with their two 'Mechs, onboard a Sea Fox DropShip, departing from Terra. Mia informed Jack and Justin than she had uncovered than her Atlas II was ''Phantom'', Devlin Stone's personnal 'Mech. | ||
The 9 July, the trio arrived to Galatea, but they expectatives to find a mercenary unit to enlist failed, as the planet was filled with ex-RAF soldiers. So Jack decided to form their own merc unit. After delivering the package into the Federated Suns' embassy, they negotiated with a Suns' agent, convincing her. | The 9 July, the trio arrived to Galatea, but they expectatives to find a mercenary unit to enlist failed, as the planet was filled with ex-RAF soldiers. So Jack decided to form their own merc unit. After delivering the package into the Federated Suns' embassy, they negotiated with a Suns' agent, convincing her. | ||