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The 6 June, the three were, with their two 'Mechs, onboard a Sea Fox DropShip, departing from Terra. Mia informed Jack and Justin than she had uncovered than her Atlas II was ''Phantom'', Devlin Stone's personnal 'Mech. The 6 June, the three were, with their two 'Mechs, onboard a Sea Fox DropShip, departing from Terra. Mia informed Jack and Justin than she had uncovered than her Atlas II was ''Phantom'', Devlin Stone's personnal 'Mech.
The 9 July, the trio arrived to Galatea, but they expectatives to find a mercenary unit to enlist failed, as the planet was filled with ex-RAF soldiers. So Jack decided to form their own merc unit. After delivering the package into the Federated Suns' embassy, they negotiated with a Suns' agent, convincing her. The 9 July, the trio arrived to Galatea, but they expectatives to find a mercenary unit to enlist failed, as the planet was filled with ex-RAF soldiers. So Jack decided to form their own merc unit. After delivering the package into the Federated Suns' embassy, they negotiated with a Suns' agent, convincing her.
− After securing a deal, all three debated which name to give at their unit, and Jack, in memory of their lost friend, choose the name: [[The Cheetahs]]. + After securing a deal, all three debated which name to give at their unit, and Jack, in memory of their lost friend, choose the name: the ''Cheetahs''.
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The 6 June, the three were, with their two 'Mechs, onboard a Sea Fox DropShip, departing from Terra. Mia informed Jack and Justin than she had uncovered than her Atlas II was ''Phantom'', Devlin Stone's personnal 'Mech. | The 6 June, the three were, with their two 'Mechs, onboard a Sea Fox DropShip, departing from Terra. Mia informed Jack and Justin than she had uncovered than her Atlas II was ''Phantom'', Devlin Stone's personnal 'Mech. | ||
The 9 July, the trio arrived to Galatea, but they expectatives to find a mercenary unit to enlist failed, as the planet was filled with ex-RAF soldiers. So Jack decided to form their own merc unit. After delivering the package into the Federated Suns' embassy, they negotiated with a Suns' agent, convincing her. | The 9 July, the trio arrived to Galatea, but they expectatives to find a mercenary unit to enlist failed, as the planet was filled with ex-RAF soldiers. So Jack decided to form their own merc unit. After delivering the package into the Federated Suns' embassy, they negotiated with a Suns' agent, convincing her. | ||
− | After securing a deal, all three debated which name to give at their unit, and Jack, in memory of their lost friend, choose the name: | + | After securing a deal, all three debated which name to give at their unit, and Jack, in memory of their lost friend, choose the name: the ''Cheetahs''. |
==Featured characters== | ==Featured characters== |