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Line 16: ''Bunt Offering'' was an unit formed of [[MechWarrior]]s of clouded origins but top-shaped equipment. They were active already in [[3151]], and in [[Galatea]], ''the Mercenary Star'', where contracted by a newborn state: the [[Tamar Pact]], specifically, by [[Sarah Regis]], the Pact's leader. As the Pact was very exigent, they must have had a good reputation and prestige.<ref> ''Tamar Rising'', p. 28 </ref> ''Bunt Offering'' was an unit formed of [[MechWarrior]]s of clouded origins but top-shaped equipment. They were active already in [[3151]], and in [[Galatea]], ''the Mercenary Star'', where contracted by a newborn state: the [[Tamar Pact]], specifically, by [[Sarah Regis]], the Pact's leader. As the Pact was very exigent, they must have had a good reputation and prestige.<ref> ''Tamar Rising'', p. 28 </ref> − However, the Offering had some disputes in Galatea with the [[Twenty-first Centauri Lancers]], another of the main units working for the Pact. These escalated during the way to Arcturus, and the 21st even asked specifically to not be deployed along them or [[Bleeding Eagles]] except in emergencies.<ref> ''Tamar Rising'', p. 83 </ref> + However, the Offering had some disputes in Galatea with the [[Twenty-first Centauri Lancers]], another of the main units working for the Pact. These escalated during the way to Arcturus, and the 21st even asked specifically to not be deployed alongst them or [[Bleeding Eagles]] except in emergencies.<ref> ''Tamar Rising'', p. 83 </ref> − The Offering, when participated at the battle of [[Pandora]], the 23 December, like the Bleeding Eagles, failed to coordinate with the Lancers, which later led to several near fiascos, leaving the 21th needlessly bogged down.<ref> ''Tamar Rising'', p. 29 </ref> + The Offering, when participated at the battle of [[Pandora]], the 23 December, like the Bleeding Eagles, failed to coordinate with the Lancers, which later led to several near fiascos, leaving the 21th nedlessly bogged down.<ref> ''Tamar Rising'', p. 29 </ref> − The Offering's next task was to take the planet [[Koniz]] for the Pact. An Falcon-offshoot group had seized the control of the world. The mercenaries performed a nighttime combat drop over the Falcon's barracks, but they've already mobilized, striking them in the darkness using a combination of tanks and modified IndustrialMechs, before retreating to the surrounding city. The Offering had to play a cat-and-mouse game on the streets, ravaging them and leaving many civilian deaths, but the Offering eventually triumphed when the would-be Falcon ''Khan'' was killed attempting to flee in his [[Nacon]] armored car. Despite the devastation, the population, when promised aid to rebuild the city, voted to join the Pact.<ref> ''Tamar Rising'', p. 31 </ref> + The Offering's next task was to take the planet [[Koniz]] for the Pact. An Falcon-offshoot group had seized the control of the cworld. The mercenaries performed a nighttime combat drop over the Falcon's barracks, but they've already mobilized, striking them in the darkness using a combination of tanks and modified IndustrialMechs, before retreating to the surrounding city. The Offering had to play a cat-and-mouse game on the streets, ravaging them and leaving many civilian deaths, but the Offering eventually triumphed when the would-be Falcon ''Khan'' was killed attempting to flee in his [[Nacon]] armored car. Despite the devastation, the population, when promised aid to rebuild the city, voted to join the Pact.<ref> ''Tamar Rising'', p. 31 </ref> − The [[Killer Bees]], a subcommand of the 21th, made their point with the Eagles during a combat exercise on [[Arcturus]], bombarding the Eagles' column with canisters filled with honey-flavored quillar syrup. When it was the turn of the Offering, they refused to be humiliated, so loaded live antiaircraft ammunition in the autocannon of their [[Partisan]] tanks, so when the Bees' DropShip [[Queen Bee]] approached them in the exercise it was subjected to return fire and had to made a emergency landing. The rest of the Bees, believing the Offering was brokering their contract, powered their energetic weapons and moved to subdue the rogue command. After half hour of hit-and-run combat, Burnt Offering surrendered and was arrested, with a a [[Clan Sea Fox]]'s Mercenary Boarding Commission began investigating the incident.<ref> ''Unit Digest: Killer Bees'', p. 201-202 </ref> + The [[Killer Bees]], a subcommand of the 21th, made their point with the Eagles during a combat exercice on [[Arcturus]], bombarding the Eagles' column with canisters filled with honey-flavored quillar syrup. When it was the turn of the Offering, they refused to be humiliated, so loaded live antiaircraft ammunition in the autocannon of their [[Partisan]] tanks, so when the Bees' DropShip [[Queen Bee]] approached them in the exercice it was subjected to return fire and had to made a emergency landing. The rest of the Bees, believing the Offering wsa broking their contract, powered their energetic weapons and moved to sudue the rogue command. After half hour of hit-and-run combat, Burnt Offering surrended and was arrested, with a a [[Clan Sea Fox]]'s Mercenary Boarding Commission began investigating the incident.<ref> ''Unit Digest: Killer Bees'', p. 201-202 </ref> ==Officers== ==Officers==
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''Bunt Offering'' was an unit formed of [[MechWarrior]]s of clouded origins but top-shaped equipment. They were active already in [[3151]], and in [[Galatea]], ''the Mercenary Star'', where contracted by a newborn state: the [[Tamar Pact]], specifically, by [[Sarah Regis]], the Pact's leader. As the Pact was very exigent, they must have had a good reputation and prestige.<ref> ''Tamar Rising'', p. 28 </ref> | ''Bunt Offering'' was an unit formed of [[MechWarrior]]s of clouded origins but top-shaped equipment. They were active already in [[3151]], and in [[Galatea]], ''the Mercenary Star'', where contracted by a newborn state: the [[Tamar Pact]], specifically, by [[Sarah Regis]], the Pact's leader. As the Pact was very exigent, they must have had a good reputation and prestige.<ref> ''Tamar Rising'', p. 28 </ref> | ||
| − | However, the Offering had some disputes in Galatea with the [[Twenty-first Centauri Lancers]], another of the main units working for the Pact. These escalated during the way to Arcturus, and the 21st even asked specifically to not be deployed | + | However, the Offering had some disputes in Galatea with the [[Twenty-first Centauri Lancers]], another of the main units working for the Pact. These escalated during the way to Arcturus, and the 21st even asked specifically to not be deployed alongst them or [[Bleeding Eagles]] except in emergencies.<ref> ''Tamar Rising'', p. 83 </ref> |
| − | The Offering, when participated at the battle of [[Pandora]], the 23 December, like the Bleeding Eagles, failed to coordinate with the Lancers, which later led to several near fiascos, leaving the 21th | + | The Offering, when participated at the battle of [[Pandora]], the 23 December, like the Bleeding Eagles, failed to coordinate with the Lancers, which later led to several near fiascos, leaving the 21th nedlessly bogged down.<ref> ''Tamar Rising'', p. 29 </ref> |
| − | The Offering's next task was to take the planet [[Koniz]] for the Pact. An Falcon-offshoot group had seized the control of the | + | The Offering's next task was to take the planet [[Koniz]] for the Pact. An Falcon-offshoot group had seized the control of the cworld. The mercenaries performed a nighttime combat drop over the Falcon's barracks, but they've already mobilized, striking them in the darkness using a combination of tanks and modified IndustrialMechs, before retreating to the surrounding city. The Offering had to play a cat-and-mouse game on the streets, ravaging them and leaving many civilian deaths, but the Offering eventually triumphed when the would-be Falcon ''Khan'' was killed attempting to flee in his [[Nacon]] armored car. Despite the devastation, the population, when promised aid to rebuild the city, voted to join the Pact.<ref> ''Tamar Rising'', p. 31 </ref> |
| − | The [[Killer Bees]], a subcommand of the 21th, made their point with the Eagles during a combat | + | The [[Killer Bees]], a subcommand of the 21th, made their point with the Eagles during a combat exercice on [[Arcturus]], bombarding the Eagles' column with canisters filled with honey-flavored quillar syrup. When it was the turn of the Offering, they refused to be humiliated, so loaded live antiaircraft ammunition in the autocannon of their [[Partisan]] tanks, so when the Bees' DropShip [[Queen Bee]] approached them in the exercice it was subjected to return fire and had to made a emergency landing. The rest of the Bees, believing the Offering wsa broking their contract, powered their energetic weapons and moved to sudue the rogue command. After half hour of hit-and-run combat, Burnt Offering surrended and was arrested, with a a [[Clan Sea Fox]]'s Mercenary Boarding Commission began investigating the incident.<ref> ''Unit Digest: Killer Bees'', p. 201-202 </ref> |
==Officers== | ==Officers== | ||