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| year                = 25 October 2006 - 16 January 2007 (BattleCorps)<br />5 August 2016 (print edition)
 
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On 5 November, Khan Franklin Hallis reviews the Wolverine situation as he shepherds a small fleet of ships through an unoccupied system. He split the evacuation fleet in the hopes of allowing more to escape — having each sub-fleet proceed separately and then rendezvousing at key systems to recalculate routes, switch up the mix of ships, and proceed along separate routes to the next rendezvous. He knows that the ilKhan's charges were baseless, but also knows that neither Nicholas nor the other Clans will listen to his protestations of innocence — especially since one of the last JumpShips to join the convoy brought a copy of the ilKhan's declaration of a Trial of Annihilation. Khan McEvedy remains missing and presumed dead in the aftermath of Great Hope's destruction, but Hallis is committed to carrying out her Switchback plan — waiting until the Nicholas' pursuit force races ahead, then following behind them unnoticed. He is fairly confident that his anti-Watch efforts have ensured operational security.
 
On 5 November, Khan Franklin Hallis reviews the Wolverine situation as he shepherds a small fleet of ships through an unoccupied system. He split the evacuation fleet in the hopes of allowing more to escape — having each sub-fleet proceed separately and then rendezvousing at key systems to recalculate routes, switch up the mix of ships, and proceed along separate routes to the next rendezvous. He knows that the ilKhan's charges were baseless, but also knows that neither Nicholas nor the other Clans will listen to his protestations of innocence — especially since one of the last JumpShips to join the convoy brought a copy of the ilKhan's declaration of a Trial of Annihilation. Khan McEvedy remains missing and presumed dead in the aftermath of Great Hope's destruction, but Hallis is committed to carrying out her Switchback plan — waiting until the Nicholas' pursuit force races ahead, then following behind them unnoticed. He is fairly confident that his anti-Watch efforts have ensured operational security.
  
Aboard the flagship ''[[Rough Rider (Individual WarShip)|Rough Rider]]'', Nicholas Kerensky commands the pursuit fleet as it sweeps back along the Exodus Road route in pursuit of the vanished Wolverines. The ilKhan visits the ship's brig, which has been outfitted to hold a special prisoner that only Nicholas and a few scientists specializing in radiation sickness know about. Nobody but Nicholas and his wife know that the prisoner is actually Sarah McEvedy, who has been undergoing regular chemical interrogation as well as medical treatment for the injuries she suffered when Karrige detonated the purloined warhead at Great Hope. Nicholas tells McEvedy he is keeping her alive in the hopes that she will break under interrogation and lead him to her surviving people. He does not care about their innocence, but greatly values the fact that their defiance has united the Clans behind him against a common foe, allowing him to push through societal change even faster than he had hoped. In the course of pressing for information about the Wolverine route, he and McEvedy discuss the false assignation of blame for the Dehra Dun nuclear attacks onto the Wolverines. McEvedy argues that if she had been willing to use nuclear weapons from the beginning, the Widowmaker enclaves would have been the first target instead of Great Hope or Dehra Dun. However Nicholas seems deaf to her reasoning. In Nicholas' view, the concepts of "right" and "wrong" are irrelevant. To him, the important thing was that McEvedy forgot to show him the respect he was due as the Great Founder. All human concerns must be sublimated in the name of unity of thought and action for the sake of the newborn Clan civilization, directed by his will alone. Nevertheless, her remarks plant a seed of doubt in Nicholas’ mind on who is the ultimate culprit that detonated the nuclear warheads at Great Hope and escalated the conflict.
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Aboard the flagship ''[[Rough Rider]]'', Nicholas Kerensky commands the pursuit fleet as it sweeps back along the Exodus Road route in pursuit of the vanished Wolverines. The ilKhan visits the ship's brig, which has been outfitted to hold a special prisoner that only Nicholas and a few scientists specializing in radiation sickness know about. Nobody but Nicholas and his wife know that the prisoner is actually Sarah McEvedy, who has been undergoing regular chemical interrogation as well as medical treatment for the injuries she suffered when Karrige detonated the purloined warhead at Great Hope. Nicholas tells McEvedy he is keeping her alive in the hopes that she will break under interrogation and lead him to her surviving people. He does not care about their innocence, but greatly values the fact that their defiance has united the Clans behind him against a common foe, allowing him to push through societal change even faster than he had hoped. In the course of pressing for information about the Wolverine route, he and McEvedy discuss the false assignation of blame for the Dehra Dun nuclear attacks onto the Wolverines. McEvedy argues that if she had been willing to use nuclear weapons from the beginning, the Widowmaker enclaves would have been the first target instead of Great Hope or Dehra Dun. However Nicholas seems deaf to her reasoning. In Nicholas' view, the concepts of "right" and "wrong" are irrelevant. To him, the important thing was that McEvedy forgot to show him the respect he was due as the Great Founder. All human concerns must be sublimated in the name of unity of thought and action for the sake of the newborn Clan civilization, directed by his will alone. Nevertheless, her remarks plant a seed of doubt in Nicholas’ mind on who is the ultimate culprit that detonated the nuclear warheads at Great Hope and escalated the conflict.
  
 
On Liny, one of [[Arcadia (Clan System)|Arcadia]]'s moons, Star Captain Amon wonders about the strange lights he's been seeing in the rocky, airless hills on the outskirts of the Ghost Bear uranium mining outpost on 16 January [[2824]]. Amon is frustrated that he's been left out of the Wolverine extermination, especially now that the Ghost Bear genetics repository on Brim has been destroyed. He expects that any intruders on Liny would be Dark Caste bandits, but as he approaches, he sees that they are spacesuited Wolverine children (Sibling Company Gamma), stealing supplies from the outpost. Amon challenges them, and they tell him they are taking supplies back to their DropShip. The ''sibko'' leader, Francis, rejects Amon's attempt to arrest them, and debates the Ghost Bear about the veracity of the claims of Wolverine perfidy. Francis admits Wolverine responsibility for the attack on Brim, but says that the warrior there was striking a blow for her people. He tells Amon that his intention is to leave Clan space and find his vanished people. Amon feels that killing innocent children would be a stain on his honor, and reluctantly allows the Wolverines to depart.
 
On Liny, one of [[Arcadia (Clan System)|Arcadia]]'s moons, Star Captain Amon wonders about the strange lights he's been seeing in the rocky, airless hills on the outskirts of the Ghost Bear uranium mining outpost on 16 January [[2824]]. Amon is frustrated that he's been left out of the Wolverine extermination, especially now that the Ghost Bear genetics repository on Brim has been destroyed. He expects that any intruders on Liny would be Dark Caste bandits, but as he approaches, he sees that they are spacesuited Wolverine children (Sibling Company Gamma), stealing supplies from the outpost. Amon challenges them, and they tell him they are taking supplies back to their DropShip. The ''sibko'' leader, Francis, rejects Amon's attempt to arrest them, and debates the Ghost Bear about the veracity of the claims of Wolverine perfidy. Francis admits Wolverine responsibility for the attack on Brim, but says that the warrior there was striking a blow for her people. He tells Amon that his intention is to leave Clan space and find his vanished people. Amon feels that killing innocent children would be a stain on his honor, and reluctantly allows the Wolverines to depart.
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Trish is mystified by the scene around Franklin's grave. She surmises that his death was an execution, rather than a battle, but cannot puzzle out the scorched bone fragments ingloriously covered with a Widowmaker cloak (Karrige) or the grave marker for McEvedy without an actual grave. A distraught Trish asks Hallis what she must do now that he's dead. A Wolverine survivor, who Trish disbelievingly recognized as a fellow warrior, comes out of the jungle and approaches her as she stands over Franklin's grave and wonders what to do. The woman is heavily scarred, and hobbled badly from her injuries. Reassured by the warrior that their people would survive so long as a single member lives, Trish hugs the survivor and finds renewed hope.
 
Trish is mystified by the scene around Franklin's grave. She surmises that his death was an execution, rather than a battle, but cannot puzzle out the scorched bone fragments ingloriously covered with a Widowmaker cloak (Karrige) or the grave marker for McEvedy without an actual grave. A distraught Trish asks Hallis what she must do now that he's dead. A Wolverine survivor, who Trish disbelievingly recognized as a fellow warrior, comes out of the jungle and approaches her as she stands over Franklin's grave and wonders what to do. The woman is heavily scarred, and hobbled badly from her injuries. Reassured by the warrior that their people would survive so long as a single member lives, Trish hugs the survivor and finds renewed hope.
  
As the pitiful remnant of Wolverine survivors resumes their trek towards the Inner Sphere, by astounding coincidence they are joined by the [[Yukon (Individual WarShip)|SLS ''Yukon'']] in September 2824, crewed by the Wolverine ''sibko'' that the Ghost Bear sentry allowed to escape. Trish Ebon welcomes them and declares that the Wolverine family is finally complete, and that they can now move forward on their mission.
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As the pitiful remnant of Wolverine survivors resumes their trek towards the Inner Sphere, by astounding coincidence they are joined by the SLS ''[[Yukon]]'' in September 2824, crewed by the Wolverine ''sibko'' that the Ghost Bear sentry allowed to escape. Trish Ebon welcomes them and declares that the Wolverine family is finally complete, and that they can now move forward on their mission.
  
 
On 28 January [[2825]] Snow Raven Khans Merrell and McKenna supervise the rebuilding efforts in Dehra Dun. While McKenna is throwing himself into the reconstruction of the Snow Raven capital, Merrell's feelings of guilt about her role in its destruction and the resulting bloodbath make her hate the sight of it. Merrell is joined by the ilKhan, who assures her that the city will be fully restored, better than before. Merrell questions that assertion, since the lives lost cannot be replaced as easily as the buildings, and the cover story has done nothing to erase her personal guilt about the true events as they played out. Nicholas answers that "there is no lie if we all believe it."  In that context, he asserts that "Barbados never happened," that the Wolverines were entirely at fault at Dehra Dun for refusing to conform, and that the genocide of the Wolverines alongside the execution of the true culprit was akin to a surgeon removing cancerous cells from the whole body. He tells Merrell that he is not twisting history; just giving Clan society a sense of meaning in the events of the Wolverine annihilation and a feeling that their cause was right and just. The details are irrelevant to the outcome — passing key messages and lessons to future generations and establishing their moral code. So long as the lesson on how selfishness, arrogance, and nonconformity leads to society's ruin was passed down, it did not matter if the stories laid the blame on Jason Karrige or Clan Wolverine.
 
On 28 January [[2825]] Snow Raven Khans Merrell and McKenna supervise the rebuilding efforts in Dehra Dun. While McKenna is throwing himself into the reconstruction of the Snow Raven capital, Merrell's feelings of guilt about her role in its destruction and the resulting bloodbath make her hate the sight of it. Merrell is joined by the ilKhan, who assures her that the city will be fully restored, better than before. Merrell questions that assertion, since the lives lost cannot be replaced as easily as the buildings, and the cover story has done nothing to erase her personal guilt about the true events as they played out. Nicholas answers that "there is no lie if we all believe it."  In that context, he asserts that "Barbados never happened," that the Wolverines were entirely at fault at Dehra Dun for refusing to conform, and that the genocide of the Wolverines alongside the execution of the true culprit was akin to a surgeon removing cancerous cells from the whole body. He tells Merrell that he is not twisting history; just giving Clan society a sense of meaning in the events of the Wolverine annihilation and a feeling that their cause was right and just. The details are irrelevant to the outcome — passing key messages and lessons to future generations and establishing their moral code. So long as the lesson on how selfishness, arrogance, and nonconformity leads to society's ruin was passed down, it did not matter if the stories laid the blame on Jason Karrige or Clan Wolverine.
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===Epilogue (added for 2016 re-release)===
 
===Epilogue (added for 2016 re-release)===
Two centuries later, on 25 May [[3041]], a [[ComStar]] [[Explorer Corps (ComStar)|Explorer Corps]] team under [[Precentor]] [[Barton Bixby]] is investigating the grave site on Barbados, finding a grassy clearing with a stone arch built over two tombstones, ringed by sixteen stone seats and hulks of long-destroyed BattleMechs. There are clear signs of an ancient battle, and remains of at least two unknown BattleMech designs. The tombstones have been decorated with (now dried) eight-month-old flowers, indicating that someone is still looking after the ritual site alongside the presence of a landing zone with DropShip burn marks.
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Two centuries later, on 25 May [[3041]], a [[ComStar]] [[Explorer Corps (ComStar)|Explorer Corps]] team under [[Precentor]] Barton Bixby is investigating the grave site on Barbados, finding a grassy clearing with a stone arch built over two tombstones, ringed by sixteen stone seats and hulks of long-destroyed BattleMechs. There are clear signs of an ancient battle, and remains of at least two unknown BattleMech designs. The tombstones have been decorated with (now dried) eight-month-old flowers, indicating that someone is still looking after the ritual site alongside the presence of a landing zone with DropShip burn marks.
  
 
Nineteen animal images, masterfully etched but crossed out, are found on the stone arch. But none of them matches the "animal head with claw marks in the background" (Clan Wolverine) from one of the destroyed 'Mechs. It is determined to be a 63% match to a tattoo found on the arm of a dead [[Minnesota Tribe]] member recovered from [[Richmond]] with discrepancies plausibly traced to the warped nature of the pilot's skin.
 
Nineteen animal images, masterfully etched but crossed out, are found on the stone arch. But none of them matches the "animal head with claw marks in the background" (Clan Wolverine) from one of the destroyed 'Mechs. It is determined to be a 63% match to a tattoo found on the arm of a dead [[Minnesota Tribe]] member recovered from [[Richmond]] with discrepancies plausibly traced to the warped nature of the pilot's skin.
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==Featured Characters==
 
==Featured Characters==
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* [[Barton Bixby]]
 
 
* [[Lisa Buhallin]]
 
* [[Lisa Buhallin]]
 
* [[Trish Ebon]]
 
* [[Trish Ebon]]
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* [[Ferris Ward]]
 
* [[Ferris Ward]]
 
* [[Jerome Winson]]
 
* [[Jerome Winson]]
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==Featured Places==
 
==Featured Places==
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* [[Arcadia (Clan System)|Arcadia]] (also Liny, a moon of Arcadia)
 
* [[Arcadia (Clan System)|Arcadia]] (also Liny, a moon of Arcadia)
 
* [[Brim]]
 
* [[Brim]]
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* [[Wayside]] (mentioned)
 
* [[Wayside]] (mentioned)
 
* [[Zulu 11981 TZ]]
 
* [[Zulu 11981 TZ]]
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==Featured BattleTech==
 
==Featured BattleTech==
 
===BattleMechs===
 
===BattleMechs===
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* ''[[Black Knight]]''
 
* ''[[Black Knight]]''
 
* ''[[Bombardier]]''
 
* ''[[Bombardier]]''
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* ''[[Thug]]''
 
* ''[[Thug]]''
 
* ''[[Wyvern]]''
 
* ''[[Wyvern]]''
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===WarShips===
 
===WarShips===
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* ''[[Vincent]]''-class corvette (''[[Badger (Individual Vincent-class WarShip)|Badger]]'')
 
* ''[[Vincent]]''-class corvette (''[[Badger (Individual Vincent-class WarShip)|Badger]]'')
 
* ''[[Whirlwind]]''-class destroyer (''[[Weasel]]'')
 
* ''[[Whirlwind]]''-class destroyer (''[[Weasel]]'')
* WarShips of unspecified class: ''[[Buccaneer (Individual WarShip)|Buccaneer]]'', ''[[Hunter's Pride (Individual WarShip)|Hunter's Pride]]'', ''[[Michigan]]'', ''[[Mustang (Individual WarShip)|Mustang]]'', ''[[Rickenbacker]]'', ''[[Rough Rider (Individual WarShip)|Rough Rider]]'', ''[[Yukon (Individual WarShip)|Yukon]]''
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* WarShips of unspecified class: ''[[Buccaneer (Individual WarShip)|Buccaneer]]'', ''[[Hunter's Pride (Individual WarShip)|Hunter's Pride]]'', ''[[Michigan]]'', ''[[Mustang (Individual WarShip)|Mustang]]'', ''[[Rickenbacker]]'', ''[[Rough Rider]]'', ''[[Yukon]]''
  
 
===DropShips===
 
===DropShips===
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==Notes==
 
==Notes==
 
* Tying into one of [[BattleTech]]'s longest-running mysteries, the novel offers tantalizing hints that up to three distinct groups of Wolverine survivors may have existed:
 
* Tying into one of [[BattleTech]]'s longest-running mysteries, the novel offers tantalizing hints that up to three distinct groups of Wolverine survivors may have existed:
** It is expressly mentioned how equipment from the cache that arguably started the entire affair (implicitly, the Tiki cache which contained equipment from the 331st Royal BattleMech Division) survived with Trish Ebon's group, strongly suggesting that they became the [[Minnesota Tribe]]. This is further reinforced by the print edition's epilogue.<br />Incumbent [[Line Developer]] [[Randall N. Bills]], when prompted for "anything you care to share about the Minnesota Tribe" in a BattleTech-themed online Q&A session,<ref>[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aAaO4hrGo1I BattleTech Q&A]] by [[Harebrained Schemes]] at Hyper RPG (12 October 2016), at 35:53</ref> explicitly said people should go read ''Betrayal of Ideals'' as it contains information about the Minnesota Tribe, thereby officially confirming the connection as fact.
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**It is expressly mentioned how equipment from the cache that arguably started the entire affair (implicitly, the Tiki cache which contained equipment from the 331st Royal BattleMech Division) survived with Trish Ebon's group, strongly suggesting that they became the [[Minnesota Tribe]]. This is further reinforced by the print edition's epilogue.<br />Incumbent [[Line Developer]] [[Randall N. Bills]], when prompted for "anything you care to share about the Minnesota Tribe" in a BattleTech-themed online Q&A session,<ref>[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aAaO4hrGo1I BattleTech Q&A]] by [[Harebrained Schemes]] at Hyper RPG (12 October 2016), at 35:53</ref> explicitly said people should go read ''Betrayal of Ideals'' as it contains information about the Minnesota Tribe, thereby officially confirming the connection as fact.
** The battleship ''Zughoffer Weir'' would reappear in [[Word of Blake]] hands more than two hundred years later, giving credence to the theory that this group of Wolverine survivors may eventually have made contact with [[ComStar]] as originally planned, may have been the true source of the information behind [[Primus of ComStar|Primus]] [[Adrienne Sims]]' "visions" (suspiciously accurate descriptions of the individual Clans) that in turn led to the formation of the [[Explorer Corps (ComStar)|Explorer Corps]], and according to a [[canon rumor]] may even have formed "The Blood", a secret cabal within the ComStar leadership.
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**The battleship ''Zughoffer Weir'' would reappear in [[Word of Blake]] hands more than two hundred years later, giving credence to the theory that this group of Wolverine survivors may eventually have made contact with [[ComStar]] as originally planned, may have been the true source of the information behind [[Primus (ComStar)|Primus]] [[Adrienne Sims]]' "visions" (suspiciously accurate descriptions of the individual Clans) that in turn led to the formation of the [[Explorer Corps (ComStar)|Explorer Corps]], and according to a [[canon rumor]] may even have formed "The Blood", a secret cabal within the ComStar leadership.
** A third group may have been a Wolverine scout detachment that made contact with [[Nueva Castile]] and became the [[Umayyads]]. However, the recorded first appearance of the Umayyads does not precisely match the Wolverine timeline, and Nueva Castile would have been a considerable detour in a wrong direction for the scout fleet to go. Additionally, the source, ''[[Touring the Stars: Granada]]'', suggests another alternative origin for the Umayyads' ancestors. Ultimately, there is some evidence but no proof linking the Umayyads to the Wolverines.
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**A third group may have been a Wolverine scout detachment that made contact with [[Nueva Castile]] and became the [[Umayyads]]. However, the recorded first appearance of the Umayyads does not precisely match the Wolverine timeline, and Nueva Castile would have been a considerable detour in a wrong direction for the scout fleet to go. Additionally, the source, ''[[Touring the Stars: Granada]]'', suggests another alternative origin for the Umayyads' ancestors. Ultimately, there is some evidence but no proof linking the Umayyads to the Wolverines.
 
* The fully canonical dates and events from this story do not match up with the chronology of the "Wolverine Diaries"<ref>See ''[[Jihad Secrets: The Blake Documents]]'': "The Not-Named", in particular pp. 121–125</ref> from ''[[Jihad Secrets: The Blake Documents]]'', marking that particular [[canon rumor]] document false, though apparently written by someone with at least a partial knowledge of the real events despite the cover-up.
 
* The fully canonical dates and events from this story do not match up with the chronology of the "Wolverine Diaries"<ref>See ''[[Jihad Secrets: The Blake Documents]]'': "The Not-Named", in particular pp. 121–125</ref> from ''[[Jihad Secrets: The Blake Documents]]'', marking that particular [[canon rumor]] document false, though apparently written by someone with at least a partial knowledge of the real events despite the cover-up.
 
* At one point<ref>Part 1 (''Foundations of Fate''), PDF document, p. 5</ref> Sarah McEvedy reminisces in internal monologue about Jason Karrige being "still bitter over that loss in battle", explicitly referring to an incident during the Pentagon Civil War. She had put it behind her while he had taken it personally. Later<ref>Part 2 (''Treachery's Stage''), PDF document, p. 5</ref> it is explained that Karrige and McEvedy were friends until Karrige "misinterpreted matters" during the Pentagon Civil War. The exact nature of the incident/battle is not elaborated upon. Clan Widowmaker was assigned to Dagda during Operation KLONDIKE and interacted mostly with Clans Goliath Scorpion and Burrock, while Clan Wolverine was on Circe sharing an operational area with Clan Snow Raven. ''[[Historical: Operation Klondike]]'' repeatedly states that the purging of Wolverine-related records made it difficult to determine their exact actions during KLONDIKE, but it does say that the Wolverines were not considered as reinforcements for the Widowmakers on Dagda (in the siege of the Black Brian). As their Clans apparently were on different worlds throughout the campaign, the incident between Karrige and McEvedy probably stemmed from something that happened between the Widowmakers and Wolverines on Strana Mechty, while the Clans were staging for KLONDIKE.
 
* At one point<ref>Part 1 (''Foundations of Fate''), PDF document, p. 5</ref> Sarah McEvedy reminisces in internal monologue about Jason Karrige being "still bitter over that loss in battle", explicitly referring to an incident during the Pentagon Civil War. She had put it behind her while he had taken it personally. Later<ref>Part 2 (''Treachery's Stage''), PDF document, p. 5</ref> it is explained that Karrige and McEvedy were friends until Karrige "misinterpreted matters" during the Pentagon Civil War. The exact nature of the incident/battle is not elaborated upon. Clan Widowmaker was assigned to Dagda during Operation KLONDIKE and interacted mostly with Clans Goliath Scorpion and Burrock, while Clan Wolverine was on Circe sharing an operational area with Clan Snow Raven. ''[[Historical: Operation Klondike]]'' repeatedly states that the purging of Wolverine-related records made it difficult to determine their exact actions during KLONDIKE, but it does say that the Wolverines were not considered as reinforcements for the Widowmakers on Dagda (in the siege of the Black Brian). As their Clans apparently were on different worlds throughout the campaign, the incident between Karrige and McEvedy probably stemmed from something that happened between the Widowmakers and Wolverines on Strana Mechty, while the Clans were staging for KLONDIKE.
 
* Although a Khan of Clan Fire Mandrill appears in this story, his or her name is not given in the text, leaving it open if it is supposed to be [[Raymond Sainze]] or [[Laura Payne]].
 
* Although a Khan of Clan Fire Mandrill appears in this story, his or her name is not given in the text, leaving it open if it is supposed to be [[Raymond Sainze]] or [[Laura Payne]].
 
* Historical data was not only purged to cover up the truth, but also edited, falsified and fabricated to fill in the gaps, as shown in the epilogue. The recordings of the pivotal Great Council sessions on 10 and 11 October 2823 where Sarah McEvedy announces her Clan's secession were recut and had parts added to become the recording of an alleged session on 8 October that [[Phelan Kell]] presented some 250 years later in the ''[[The Clans: Warriors of Kerensky|Warriors of Kerensky]]'' document, which gives a distinctly different impression of what really happened.
 
* Historical data was not only purged to cover up the truth, but also edited, falsified and fabricated to fill in the gaps, as shown in the epilogue. The recordings of the pivotal Great Council sessions on 10 and 11 October 2823 where Sarah McEvedy announces her Clan's secession were recut and had parts added to become the recording of an alleged session on 8 October that [[Phelan Kell]] presented some 250 years later in the ''[[The Clans: Warriors of Kerensky|Warriors of Kerensky]]'' document, which gives a distinctly different impression of what really happened.
* The story was controversial with some [[BattleTech]] fans<ref>See [http://battlecorps.com/community/viewtopic.php?t=4146 BattleCorps discussion thread] about the series (dead link)</ref> because Pardoe wrote the story of Clan Wolverine's annihilation differently from how it had been presented in the past (especially Phelan Kell's aforementioned report): The reviled "Not-Named Clan" was revealed to have actually been acting in a noble and honorable way in this story. In contrast to the official record, they were singled out by Nicholas Kerensky as an example for those who would oppose his vision. And while the Absorption had been escalated into an Annihilation by Karrige's personal grudge, Kerensky still turned a blind eye to the other Clans' weariness of the Wolverines’ growing power and prideful independence. In Nicholas' mind, this served to make them a lightning rod against which he could rally the other Clans behind him to remove the risk of nonconformity shattering the unity his newly created Clan culture achieved after the Pentagon Civil War.<br />This was not entirely new information though. It should be noted that then-[[Line Developer]] [[Randall N. Bills]] had previously written the first two parts of the [[Founding of the Clans]] trilogy which already portrayed Nicholas Kerensky as a manipulative sociopath who built a personality cult around himself and was readily prepared to kill or instigate civil war among his people to further his agenda of creating an all-new society. However, initially only the German translations of these two novels saw publication. ''[[Fall from Glory]]'', the first part, was finally published in English until November 2007, long after ''Betrayal of Ideals''. Following the success of the [[2019 Clan Invasion crowdfunding campaign]], the first two books revised and expanded and the third completed and the entire trilogy finally saw publication in English.
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* The story was controversial with some [[BattleTech]] fans<ref>See [http://battlecorps.com/community/viewtopic.php?t=4146 BattleCorps discussion thread] about the series (dead link)</ref> because Pardoe wrote the story of Clan Wolverine's annihilation differently from how it had been presented in the past (especially Phelan Kell's aforementioned report): The reviled "Not-Named Clan" was revealed to have actually been acting noble and honorable in this story. In contrast to the official record, they were singled out by Nicholas Kerensky for opposing him so blatantly. And while the Absorption had been escalated into an Annihilation by Karrige's personal grudge, Kerensky still turned a blind eye to the other Clans' weariness of the Wolverines’ growing power and prideful independence. In Nicholas' mind, this served to make them a lightning rod against which he can rally the other Clans behind him to remove the risk of nonconformity shattering the unity his newly created Clan culture achieved after the Pentagon Civil War.<br />It should be noted, though, that then [[Line Developer]] [[Randall N. Bills]] had previously written the first two parts of the [[Founding of the Clans]] trilogy that already portrayed Nicholas Kerensky as a manipulative sociopath who built a personality cult around himself and was readily prepared to kill or instigate civil war among his people to further his agenda of creating an all-new society; however, ''[[Fall from Glory]]'', the first part, would not be published in English until November 2007, long after ''Betrayal of Ideals'', and the second part, ''[[Visions of Rebirth]]'', was only ever published in its German translation and remained unpublished in English. Later, with the success of the [[2019 Clan Invasion crowdfunding campaign]], both books, as well as the unpublished third book, [[Land of Dreams]] (formerly titled Forging of Blood), were approved for definitive publication in 2021.
 
* Blaine Pardoe has written extensively about the American Civil War, and has been known to frequently insert references to the Civil War into his works. The shuttle ''[[Shelby Foote]]'' from this story (in the BattleCorps edition's epilogue) was apparently named for real-world historian [[w:Shelby Foote|Shelby Foote]], who rose to prominence with a work on the American Civil War and passed away in 2005. Another nod to the Civil War era seems to be the WarShip named ''[[General Stuart]]''.
 
* Blaine Pardoe has written extensively about the American Civil War, and has been known to frequently insert references to the Civil War into his works. The shuttle ''[[Shelby Foote]]'' from this story (in the BattleCorps edition's epilogue) was apparently named for real-world historian [[w:Shelby Foote|Shelby Foote]], who rose to prominence with a work on the American Civil War and passed away in 2005. Another nod to the Civil War era seems to be the WarShip named ''[[General Stuart]]''.
* The fighting over the Tiki cache on Circe extends to "Wombat Ridge", and a similar terrain feature is later named on Strana Mechty. This is apparently a shout-out to prominent [[BattleTech Forum]] user "Wombat". Similarly, the "Rooster Plains" on Circe are apparently a shout-out to prominent forum user "Roosterboy".
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* The fighting over the Tiki cache on Circe extends to "Wombat Ridge", and a similar terrain feature is later named on Strana Mechty. This is apparently a shout-out to prominent [[BattleTech Forum]] user "Wombat". Similarly, the "Rooster Plains" on Circe are apparently a shout-out to prolific forum user "Roosterboy".
 
* According to the author in his postscript to the story (BattleCorps edition), the historical annihilation of the order of the [[w:Knights Templar|Knights Templar]], who were later exonerated, served as an inspiration for the story.
 
* According to the author in his postscript to the story (BattleCorps edition), the historical annihilation of the order of the [[w:Knights Templar|Knights Templar]], who were later exonerated, served as an inspiration for the story.
  
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==External Links==
 
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* [http://battlecorps.com/community/viewtopic.php?t=4146 Author's commentary] (dead link)
 
* [http://battlecorps.com/community/viewtopic.php?t=4146 Author's commentary] (dead link)
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