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He was accepted in the [[Sian Center for Martial Disciplines]]. There he became close to one instructor in particular, ''[[Sao-Shao]]'' [[Jusu Park]], a retired [[Death Commando]] who helped him to curb his intense need to criticize himself and freed him of such self-destructive behavior. He was accepted in the [[Sian Center for Martial Disciplines]]. There he became close to one instructor in particular, ''[[Sao-Shao]]'' [[Jusu Park]], a retired [[Death Commando]] who helped him to curb his intense need to criticize himself and freed him of such self-destructive behavior.
− He was marked as an excellent officer-in-training as well as highly competent MechWarrior, and his marksmanship scores at the extreme ranges of the [[BattleMech]] firing range set SCMD records during his attendance. + He was marked as an an excellent officer-in-training as well as highly competent MechWarrior, and his marksmanship scores at the extreme ranges of the [[BattleMech]] firing range set SCMD records during his attendance.
Once graduated, he was assigned a lance command intended to reinforce battle losses within the Third Confederation Reserve Cavalry. He was able to select from a large pool of candidates and focused on selecting MechWarriors fitting what he had learnt in the [[SCMD]]. He was proven a shining example of the new breed of Capellan officers.<ref name=BDYZp4/> Once graduated, he was assigned a lance command intended to reinforce battle losses within the Third Confederation Reserve Cavalry. He was able to select from a large pool of candidates and focused on selecting MechWarriors fitting what he had learnt in the [[SCMD]]. He was proven a shining example of the new breed of Capellan officers.<ref name=BDYZp4/>
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He was accepted in the [[Sian Center for Martial Disciplines]]. There he became close to one instructor in particular, ''[[Sao-Shao]]'' [[Jusu Park]], a retired [[Death Commando]] who helped him to curb his intense need to criticize himself and freed him of such self-destructive behavior. | He was accepted in the [[Sian Center for Martial Disciplines]]. There he became close to one instructor in particular, ''[[Sao-Shao]]'' [[Jusu Park]], a retired [[Death Commando]] who helped him to curb his intense need to criticize himself and freed him of such self-destructive behavior. | ||
− | He was marked as an excellent officer-in-training as well as highly competent MechWarrior, and his marksmanship scores at the extreme ranges of the [[BattleMech]] firing range set SCMD records during his attendance. | + | He was marked as an an excellent officer-in-training as well as highly competent MechWarrior, and his marksmanship scores at the extreme ranges of the [[BattleMech]] firing range set SCMD records during his attendance. |
Once graduated, he was assigned a lance command intended to reinforce battle losses within the Third Confederation Reserve Cavalry. He was able to select from a large pool of candidates and focused on selecting MechWarriors fitting what he had learnt in the [[SCMD]]. He was proven a shining example of the new breed of Capellan officers.<ref name=BDYZp4/> | Once graduated, he was assigned a lance command intended to reinforce battle losses within the Third Confederation Reserve Cavalry. He was able to select from a large pool of candidates and focused on selecting MechWarriors fitting what he had learnt in the [[SCMD]]. He was proven a shining example of the new breed of Capellan officers.<ref name=BDYZp4/> |