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Arthur Chin was born in [[Sian]], the oldest son of a successful Capellan merchant who wanted to be a MechWarrior from a very early age. A close family friend, retired MechWarrior [[Peter Horne]], got the blessing to start guiding Arthur towards a career in the CCAF when he was four. Arthur Chin was born in [[Sian]], the oldest son of a successful Capellan merchant who wanted to be a MechWarrior from a very early age. A close family friend, retired MechWarrior [[Peter Horne]], got the blessing to start guiding Arthur towards a career in the CCAF when he was four.
− Arthur was at the top of his classes displaying a focus and maturity in vast excess of his age, but his worst flaw was that he imposed to himself his own high standards. So profound it was, that any perceived stumble of failure to excel made him criticize himself in a way that bordered self-destruction. Though few in time, they always ended with a sharp and sudden period of self-loathing. + Arthur was at the top of his classes displaying a a focus and maturity in vast excess of his age, but his worst flaw was that he imposed to himself his own high standards. So profound it was, that any perceived stumble of failure to excel made him criticize himself in a way that bordered self-destruction. Though few in time, they always ended with a sharp and sudden period of self-loathing.
He was accepted in the [[Sian Center for Martial Disciplines]]. There he became close to one instructor in particular, ''[[Sao-Shao]]'' [[Jusu Park]], a retired [[Death Commando]] who helped him to curb his intense need to criticize himself and freed him of such self-destructive behavior. He was accepted in the [[Sian Center for Martial Disciplines]]. There he became close to one instructor in particular, ''[[Sao-Shao]]'' [[Jusu Park]], a retired [[Death Commando]] who helped him to curb his intense need to criticize himself and freed him of such self-destructive behavior.
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Arthur Chin was born in [[Sian]], the oldest son of a successful Capellan merchant who wanted to be a MechWarrior from a very early age. A close family friend, retired MechWarrior [[Peter Horne]], got the blessing to start guiding Arthur towards a career in the CCAF when he was four. | Arthur Chin was born in [[Sian]], the oldest son of a successful Capellan merchant who wanted to be a MechWarrior from a very early age. A close family friend, retired MechWarrior [[Peter Horne]], got the blessing to start guiding Arthur towards a career in the CCAF when he was four. | ||
− | Arthur was at the top of his classes displaying a focus and maturity in vast excess of his age, but his worst flaw was that he imposed to himself his own high standards. So profound it was, that any perceived stumble of failure to excel made him criticize himself in a way that bordered self-destruction. Though few in time, they always ended with a sharp and sudden period of self-loathing. | + | Arthur was at the top of his classes displaying a a focus and maturity in vast excess of his age, but his worst flaw was that he imposed to himself his own high standards. So profound it was, that any perceived stumble of failure to excel made him criticize himself in a way that bordered self-destruction. Though few in time, they always ended with a sharp and sudden period of self-loathing. |
He was accepted in the [[Sian Center for Martial Disciplines]]. There he became close to one instructor in particular, ''[[Sao-Shao]]'' [[Jusu Park]], a retired [[Death Commando]] who helped him to curb his intense need to criticize himself and freed him of such self-destructive behavior. | He was accepted in the [[Sian Center for Martial Disciplines]]. There he became close to one instructor in particular, ''[[Sao-Shao]]'' [[Jusu Park]], a retired [[Death Commando]] who helped him to curb his intense need to criticize himself and freed him of such self-destructive behavior. |